Kohema

Hey /conlangs. Nice to meet you! I have almost completed (99%) the grammar and "personality" of my conlang Diagrontsha Tijatta (Diagronish tongue).
I think, that you are experienced with languages. I really want to know, if you can identify some features, rules and characteristics of my conlang just by looking at it. It's really interesting for me to see, if experienced people are able to identify some things. So I will show you my first text written in it.
Some things, I have to say:
I can't deny, that the languages, which I can speak (more or less), German, English, Turkish and Japanese and some characteristics of Proto-Germanic and PIE, inspired me, sometimes very much.
I creat my vocabulary (also roots for deriving) through associations or references. Two examples:

• reference: After playing the video game To The Moon I decided to name the "moon" after the female main character of the game.
• association: naming "envelop" after the place where the main characters of that video game hugged eachother

There are some irregularities in the text.
I'm rather a noob to linguistics. It's just one of my hobbies. I know enough about them to create a language without help (I know this conlang subreddit for few days and I have never been to a forum for conlangs). I don't know how to treat accents or vowels after [i], [u], [y] and [ɯ] in IPA. That's why I marked stresses with writing stressed syllables bold and why I wrote [j], [w], [ɥ] and [ɰ] after every [i], [u], [y] and [ɯ] before other vowels. Just ignore this... xD Maybe you can also tell me, what would be correct.
I translated my favourite song into my conlang. It's also the first text, longer than one sentence for testing purposes, written in it. I tried to translate from Japanese, with rarely watching at the English translation.

• Lyrics of the song: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/yosuga/hiyokunohane.htm
• Japanese text: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/yosuga/hiyokunohane.jis

Here the text in the romanized version of my conlang

Zija hahi Fefijire
Kasuni Horeni Kasaeta di,
Phema coroni Tsuwera tagi terija soru wa?
Tagidi Hezeni Delolu fao toma hahu,
Sa Ezuehera, so Kjela.
Kasa ukeori Hezuera pheu fîkoeru zuta,
Kara da dhêzule Pheta kere!
Zuta Kara di surû kora Herotê wa Kohema ganooinû Nema,
ma Nara kene hire, kene pura vi.
Zuta Wasa Hikoirera, Zolê teiwa ryijaija huri,
mênga thîzai Herotê, wazû nikikagaira,
ma cotai Zueja, Kara Jephema korû,
wa Kasa teiwama tedezi Cjeru, Kara
kaijo wo qa'anjau Jephena.
Kata vadozi Horeni Jokîo,
Phena zhengui coroni Tsuwera di uwesu wa?
Sa dhodî vamini Dacotu fao toma fafu,
Dozuena qakasu Kara.
Fîkoori Erikena Kaja jepheu weezu zuta,
noi Nanaera nepizai.
Zuta Kara rafû kora Herode wa Nesa Hitsuna marisija hajû,
ma Kama kene doze, kene pura vi.
Zuta vakaijo Lêkhora, Kjena Kasa Hikora Zolê bi kenu,
mênga kazoi Herotê, wazû valeijobira,
ma Kasa Jephema sozokaoi Zueja,
wa Kasa Jephema medeoi Cjeru, Kara
kaijo wo fêgu Nema Jephena.
Kasa Mishama Hikora waku fîsoori
Kaezueheta, Kara kaesu riki Nwana,
tshide Danja suweru Nema.
Kjeutaja,
zuta Kara di surû kora Herotê wa Kohema ganooinû Nema,
ma Nara kene hire, kene pura vi.
Zuta Wasa Hikoirera, Zolê teiwa ryijaija huri,
mênga thîzai Herotê, wazû nikikagaira,
ma cotai Zueja, Kara Jephema korû,
wa Kasa teiwama tedezi Cjeru, Kara
kaijo wo qa'anjau Jephena.

Now the IPA-version:

[zija hahi fefijiɾe
kasuni hoɾeni kasaɛta di
ɸɛma kɔɾoni tsuweɾa tagi teɾija soɾu wa
tagidi hezeni delolu faɔ tɔma hahu
sa ezuwɛhɛɾa sɔ kjɛla
kasa ukeoɾi hezuwɛɾa ɸeu fykoeɾu zuta
kaɾa da ðøzule ɸɛta kɛɾɛ
zuta kaɾa di suɾɯ koɾa hɛɾɔtœ wa kɔhɛma gano:inɯ nema
ma naɾa kɛne hiɾe kɛne puɾa ʋi
zuta wasa hikoiɾeɾa zɔlœ teiwa ɾəijaija huɾi
møŋa θyzai heɾɔtœ wazɯ nikikagaiɾa
ma kɔtai zuwɛja kaɾa jɛɸɛma koɾɯ
wa kasa teiwama tɛdezi tsjeɾu kaɾa
kaijo wɔ dzaʔanjau jeɸɛna
kata ʋadozi hoɾeni jokyɥo
ɸɛna ʒeŋui koɾoni tsuweɾa di ʔuwesu wa
sa ðody ʋamini datsotu faɔ tɔma fafu
dozuwɛna dzakasu kaɾa
fyko:ɾi ʔeɾikena kaja jɛɸeu we:zu zuta
noi nanaɛɾa nepizai
zuta kaɾa ɾafɯ koɾa hɛɾɔdɛ wa nɛsa hitsuna maɾisija hajɯ
ma kama kɛnɛ dɔzɛ kɛne puɾa ʋi
zuta ʋakaijo lœxɔɾa kjɛna kasa hikoɾa zɔlø bi kenu
møŋa kazoi heɾɔtœ wazɯ ʋaleijobiɾa
ma kasa jɛɸɛma sɔzɔkaoi zuwɛja
wa kasa jɛɸɛma mɛdɛoi tsjeɾu kaɾa
kaijo wɔ føgu nema jɛɸɛna
kasa miʃama hikoɾa waku fyso:ɾi
kaezuwɛhɛta kaɾa kaesu ɾiki nwana
tʃide danja suweɾu nema
kjeutaja
zuta kaɾa di suɾɯ koɾa hɛɾɔtœ wa kɔhɛma gano:inɯ nema
ma naɾa kɛne hiɾe kɛne puɾa ʋi
zuta wasa hikoiɾeɾa zɔlœ teiwa ɾəijaija huɾi
møŋa θyzai heɾɔtœ wazɯ nikikagaiɾa
ma kɔtai zuwɛja kaɾa jɛɸɛma koɾɯ
wa kasa teiwama tɛdezi tsjeɾu kaɾa
kaijo wɔ dzaʔanjau jeɸɛna]