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Swadesh List of my dialect of Telugu (from Tamil Nadu)

2024.05.08 13:42 RisyanthBalajiTN Swadesh List of my dialect of Telugu (from Tamil Nadu)

Word final u are ɯ~ɨ and am is õ
English - Romanization - ‌‌ Tamil
I - nānu (nā) - நானு
We - manam(manõ) - மனம்
We(exc)- māmu - மாமு
You(sing) - nuvvu - நுவ்வு
You(plu)- mīru- மீரு
They - Vālu - வாளு(வாலு)
This - idi - இதி
That - adi - அதி
Which - edi - எதி
Here - īda or indu ( ikkada) - ஈட or இந்து
There - āda andu (akkada )- ஆட
Who - Evaru or Evuru (slurred yoru)- யோரு
What - Ēmi - ஏமி
Where- Yāda or Endu - யாட or எந்து
When - Eppudu -எப்புடு
How - Ella - எல்ல
Not- Kādu - காது
All - Ettā(ā nasalised) எத்தாம்
Many - Ninda - நிண்ட
Some/Few - koccanga - கொச்சங்க
Other - vēra or maddadi -மத்ததி
Numbers- same as Tamil
Big - bedda - பெத்த
Long - nītanga(older nīduppunga) - நீட்டங்க
Wide - agalanga - அகலங்க
Thick- tadimalunga - தடிமலுங்க
Heavy - gananga - கனங்க
small - cinnadi - சின்னதி
Short - kuttainga - குட்டைங்க
woman - āndutta -ஆண்டுத்த
man - movvāndu - மொவ்வாண்டு
human being - manusandu- மனுசண்டு
child - bidda - பிட்ட
male child - mobidda - மோபிட்ட
Female child - āndubidda- ஆண்டுபிட்ட
Male offspring- koduku- கொடுக்கு
Female offspring- kūturu- கூத்துரு
wife - ālu- ஆளு
Husband - mōndu - மோண்டு
mother - amma - அம்மா
father - ayya - அய்ய
Animal - mirugam - மிருகம்
fish - mīnu - மீனு
dog - kukka - குக்க
snake - pambu - பாம்பு
worm - pulu - புலு
tree - mākku - மாக்கு
forest - cēnu - சேனு
stick - koyya - கொய்ய
fruit - pandu - பண்டு
seed - vittu - வித்து
leaf - ākku - ஆக்கு
root - vēru - வேரு
flower- puvvu - புவ்வு
grass - kasuvu - கசுவு
rope - tādu - தாடு
skin - tōlu - தோலு
meat - kanda - கண்ட
blood - netturu - நெத்துரு
bone - emaka - எமக்க
egg - guddu - குட்டு
horn - kombu - கொம்பு
tail - vālu(tōka) - தோக்க
hair - verikalu(plural) - வெரிக்கலு
head - tala - தல
ear - cevvu - செவ்வு
eye - kannu - கண்ணு
nose - mūkku - மூக்கு
mouth - nōru - நோரு
tooth - pallu - பல்லு
tongue (organ)- nāliku- நாலிக்கு
fingernail - gōru - கோரு
foot - padam - பாதம்
leg - kālu - காலு
Knee - mutti or molangālu - முட்டி
hand - ceyyi - செய்யி
wing - rekka- ரெக்க
belly - kaduppu - கடுப்பு
neck - mada - மத
back - vīpu - வீப்பு
breast -rommu - ரொம்மு
heart - idayam - இதயம்
liver - īralu - ஈரலு
to drink- tāvu - தாவு
to eat - tinu - தினு
to bite - koruku - கொருக்கு
rain - vāna - வான
stone - kallu or rayi - ராயி or கல்லு
Note : My dialect exists only in the spoken form. I wrote in Tamil to avoid discrepancies between t and ʈ. For non Tamils த is t and ட is ʈ.
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2024.04.01 12:40 Mikasa-Iruma vidhi aadina vintha aata

Nenu 24M. Nakantu chinnapatinundi oka movayya, atthayya athani pillalu tappinchi evaru leru. Na pedda bammardhi, na love, dani chelli, oka bammardi. Athaya nannu eppudu intlo nundi bayataku pampiddama ani chusthundi kani mavayya ki bhayapadi maata baytaki ranivvadu. Enduko evaru chepparu. Alagani baaga chusukodani kaadu chudalsinantha varaku chusthundi. Ilaga nenu 24 ki vaccha. Oka roju movayya valla friend vachi family tho saha motham undi madhyalo "naku help cheyyi apatlo naku athma baaki unnavu ani annadu", ishtam lekapoyina vastha annadu. E lopu movayya kuturni ni a friend wife(Aunty) machika chesukoni kodukkichi pelli chesthanandi. Na heart weak ipoyindi badha padda,edicha, e rayi rappo ani tiriga, Athaya pattinchukoledu, nannu oravthalaki tarimesaru. Appudu na atha kalla loni anadham ippatiki gurthe. e lopu sudden ga valla chinabbayi ki legs den ge say. Edolaga bathike unnadu. Kani em matladadu. A aunty ni chusi bhayapadathadu. Ila konni rojulaki na lovvu pelli a bhuchodi( Friend koduku) tho ipoyindi. Vadoka sadist ani tarvatha ardhamayyindi daniki. Nana himsalu pettaru. Civariki vadine lepesaru. Elopu movayya ni lepesaru. enduku ani adagadaniki vellina bava ni thana marriage lo lepesaru. Athayani lepesaru. A bammardi unnado ledo teledu. Inni badhalu oke sari padatam valla unalive cheddamani pothe Nannu oravathala oka ammayi esesindi tarvatha vallalo kalupukundi. Success ruchi chusa kani ekkuva kaalam undakundane chachindi. Nenu malli na place ki velthe mosam chesanani nannu lepesaru. Luckiga brathika. adevado peddavida vachi nenu karan born anduke chavaledandi. Tarvatha okame ki parichayam chesindi. Thana pets nannu emanale, thanaki enduko doubt vachi aara testhe thanu na maradal anta, nakoka place undanta, ani cheppi mellaga nanu lobarchukundi. (Sed lyf). Ikkada katha entayya ante thana anna na amma ni premichadu kaani thaniki movayya friend tho fix ithadi. Asusual ga lepukoni poyadu godavaindi fight ayayi nenuputtadam, amma nanna chavadam jarigayi. Movayya nannu intiki tesukelladu. Idi telisi feel ayyelopu Nannu lepayniki inkodu tayarayyadu. E lopu na love naku utharam rasi baava esthava andi. Answer cheppe lopu verevadu esesadu. Vadinko sadist. Kukkalaki raktham tagisthadu. Na love message chesthe chivariki velli godavapadi esesa. paralysis bacha gaadu pedda manishi laga matladuthunnadu. Appude telisindi e story antha. Sare kalisundama ante den gey ra andi. Nakunna inni daridralalonu na vente unna na mardhal daggaraki velli help chesthunna. Danikoti kavalanta danikosam help adigithe chestha ani maaticha. Idi evari meda fight chesthundayya ante a Aunty meda. Nannu veddamukune vadni vesesi velle tirugu prayanam lo. emindo teledu pichi ekkina danla chesthunte gathi tappaka lepesa. Unnadi ledu, unchukunnadi ledu, future lodi ledu. Malli raallu rappalane chusukuntu toorpu ki tirigi dandam petti utharaniki ki vellipoya.
Anukunnadi dakkadu. Anukoka poyina dakkadu. Dakkina undadu. Chavu kuda jali padi odilesindi. Stoicness periginde tappa e sukham ledu. Fuck my sed lyf.
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2024.03.27 08:06 pullamma04 Entayya idi

Entayya idi
Ma amma ki telsina aunty okkaru nannu valla koduku computer exam ki mundu doubts unnay clear cheyadaniki oka tution class teeskuntara Ani adigaru. Aa sarle computer ae kada ani ok ani cheppa. Teera chusesariki vadi circullam idi. Fuse out bro. 8th class Delhi public school lo iyyani nerputunaru 🙂👍
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2024.01.20 12:07 pillabacha_11 extra ordinary trash

extra ordinary trash
I just finished watching ‘Extra Ordinary Man’ . It is a bad movie, but compared to other bad movies, this movie feels absolutely trash from a technical standpoint. I don’t exactly know what it is called, but the moment in this movie feels so jarring. The opening scene staging was absolutely pathetic. I thought I accidentally skipped the movie forward and felt the same in other scenes. The acting felt like they were rehearsing, and the audio track doesn’t feel fine-tuned. It doesn’t give me a feel that I am watching a movie but feels like a YouTube skit.
https://preview.redd.it/khbzmg6vukdc1.png?width=1365&format=png&auto=webp&s=e4d20e812294015fc4589ec6b5b05b041b7bacfc
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2023.01.16 08:28 sprmora Ammamagaari avakai aakhari mudda

Ammamagaari avakai aakhari mudda
Chinnapati nundhi nenu nanna side relations kante amma side relations thone chala close. Puttindi Vizag daggara oka oolro. Perigindi anthe Hyderabad. Nanna side relatives andaru Hyderabad lone undevaru so antha special em ledu. But prathi summer ki ammammagaari uru velladam ante bhibhatsamaina excitement. Uru, gaali, janalu edo teliyani magic. Summer lo thathayyagaari toh mamidi thota ki velli mamidi kayala basta intiki teeskocchevallam. Ammamma avakai pettedi. Year madhyalo kuda avakai petti Hyderabad pampinchedi. Job kosam Pune shift ayyam motham family. Appudu kuda regular ga yearly twice avakai paachadi pampinchevallu.
Lost ammammagaaru recently. Thathayyagaarni maatho teeskochesam. Inka aa uruki naaku sambhandam ledu ane baadha cheppukolenidi. Akkada oka identity undedi naaku. Falanavalla manamadu, Falana valla koduku ani. Naaku teliyanivallu kuda mammalni gurthupettevaru. Inka em ledu. Na ani cheppukodaniki uru ledu. Grand parents are precious. Spend as much time as you can with them. Aa time pothe malla raadu and those regrets will be with you forever.
All is lost now. I feel like a regular person without an identity in a big city. Anthe !!! Miss you ammamma !!!
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2022.10.28 18:30 Tall-Return 40F here

My husband of 60 years passed away 9 years back, leaving me with a 10 year old daughter. I don't want her to grow up father less, so andariki ma aayana Dubai lo untadu, NRI ani cheptu unta. Ma aayana potu potu rendu apartmentlu rasicchi poyadu.. musalode kani mahanubhavudu. My daughter and I live in one apartment and I rented out the second one to two IT employees and a 19 year old kid.
I want to confess something with you bondhas.. naku Dalapathi movie lo Rajinikanth amma lanti flashback story okati undhi. Naku around 20 years unnappudu oka auto driver tho kaalu jaaranu. Nenu pregnant ani telisina maru kshaname vaadu aa auto eskoni jump aipoyadu. Few months later oka pandanti maga bidda ki janmanicchanu, kani ee paadu samajanni edurkoleka, oka bastard child ni penchaleka vadni oka butta lo petti River Musi lo vadilesa. Vadiki meda meedha rupayi billantha puttu maccha undhi. Adhokkate gurtu.
Cut cheste, 17 years later oka babu ma rendo apartment rent kosam vachadu. Atani meda meedha puttumacchani chusi artham ayyindi vadu 9 masalu mosi, kanna na koduke ani. Kani aa vishayam vadiki ela cheppagalanu. Chepta nannu ee janma lo kshamistada? Edhi emaina na kodukuni na daggare unchukundam ani gatti nishchayinchukunnanu.
Rent akkarledu babu ani cheppanu. Sontha koduku daggara dabbu teeskunentha papishti danni kaadhu! Vadu na kosam roju milk packets testadu, Swiggy lo groceries order chestadu, train tickets book cheydam and sometimes medicines tevadam lanti panulu chesi pedatadu. Enthaina pegu bandham kadha, vadiki kuda ila naku help cheyalani anipinchi undavacchu. Adhe pegu bandham valla appudappudu vadiki muddulu kuda icchedanni.. na bangaru konda!
Kani emaindho emo, sudden oka roju illu khaali chesi vellipoyadu.. ekkadunnado ento na chinni thandri. Time ki thintunado ledho :'(
I am sure he's missing me.. I only wish for his return and to tell him the truth on his return.
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2022.10.21 09:46 Sweet_Summmer_Child every single lunch box lore shitpost

The OG
The Girl
The CEO
The Father of the Guy
The Amma of the Guy
Bangala Dhumpa Garu
The Manager
The Finance Minister aka Nirmala Maami
Buttalu Amme Sthree (ButtaMomma)
The Restaurant Owner
The Guy's Friend
Colleague crushing on the Girl
Colleague crushing on the Guy
Dad of the Girl
Kuragayalu seller of the Guy's family
Son of the Restaurant Owner
The update we all wanted : Update
did i miss anyone?
one word.... lmao
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2022.10.20 12:49 insiderway Idhi na kadupuna cheda puttindi

Ma amma nanna entha voddu anna na kuturu adigindi kada ani job chestha ante ok anna, ofc lo evado deniki nachadu anta vadini line lo pettadaniki idhi lunch ki rammani invite chesidanta vadu na friend koduku kabatti ranu annadu inkevadina ithe lunch taruvatha oyo ani velle vallu after 9 months ma intlo oka buddodu tirugutundevadu.
Intiki velli kodadam ante valla amma asalu kottanivvaledu paiga nenedo tappu chesinattu asalu meru job ki pampinchabatte idantha jarigindi ani na meeda reverse aiyyidi.
Ippude dani mail nundi resignation letter pampincha. Na badha evariki cheppukoleka ikkada cheppukuntunna.
Alage oka manchi abbi evarina unte cheppandi deeniki pelli chesi padestha., ippude manchi dating lo post kuda veyadam jarigindi F4M ani. Koncham help cheyandi prends.
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2022.08.19 06:11 entoasalu rant

recent ga break up aindi bondas, it is so sad and i am trying to let go. i want to let go and recover, get back to life. i am trying to sleep a lot to processes all the pain and bad shit that has happened to me. naku unna rakarakala baadhallo idi okkati. here, sleeping is a gateway to escape from everything and to find balance.
problem enti ante, ma amma. she is not letting me sleep at all. to add upto it, ma amma valla cousin valla koduku who is 32 year old had a brain stroke. doctor told him that it is because his shitty lifestyle and lack of exercise. ippudu ma amma full defensive ayyi, nannu roju podhunne nidra leputundi, naku rathri 4 aithe kani nidra ravatledu. for context, i am a healthy person who also diets, i know my shit and have my thing figured out. and she is also behind me to workout and to continue dieting when i am on a break that i genuinely lose my interest in dieting or working out. diet lo breaks are important and she always puts me in a place where i have to prove her everything. life is falling apart anna feeling ostundi.
peace of mind undatledu. nidra undatledu. office untundi. focus undatledu.
edit: break up aina avvakapoina, my life is shit already and i just need to recover from a lot of stuff. i feel so caged.
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2022.05.25 17:40 safer__sephiroth కృష్ణ మాయ part - 1.1

Vaaram aindi. Nenu vellalsina time aindi. Morning mavayya intiki ochesadu nannu tiskelladaniki. Nenu na academics certificates anni sardukuntunte amma nanna room loki ocharu. Valla moham chudalante bayamestundi. Chuste edchestanemo. Amma cheppindi nijame, moodu rojulaki minchi vallani chudakunda epuduu undaledhu. Alantidi nelala tarabadi vere vurlo ante, entha gatti vallakaina badha mamule. Nanna checklist cheptunnaru, nenu annitiki uu kodtunnanu. Amma nannu hug cheskuni edchestundi. Nanna vaipu chusanu. Ayana kallalo neellu.
Nanna emo “osey, vadiki dosalu chesi tinipinchu. Malli epudu thintado ne chethi vanta”
Amma kallu tuduchukuni kitchen ki parugu tisindi. Room lo nenu nanna unnam.
Nanna “ chudu krishna, place marindi ani badhapadaku. Me atha mavayyalu kuda amma nanna lage. Vallaki koduku ledu kabatti ninnu sontha koduku lage chuskuntaru. Prema ki ne vishayam cheppaanu. Tana gurinchi bayapadaku. Tanaki nuvvante lopala abhimaname. Final ga, ekkuva stress avvaku. Bayapadaku. Athaya unnaru, mavayya unnaru, prema undi. Phone cheste mem kuda unnam nitho. Nuv chala gattodivi ra, anduke inka peaceful ga unnav”
Inthalo amma ochindi vedi vedi dosalu plate lo veskuni. Nanna edo cheptunnadu kani amma dosalu tinipistunte em teliyatledhu. Entha bavunnai, malli epudu ochi thintano emo.
Amma start chesindi “nanna antha sutthi cheptadu kani. Nenu short and sweet ga chepta. Monna mahesh babu cinemalo cheppinattu. Nikante thopu evadu ledu ikkada. Anthe. Ne chaduvu damage aindi kani, nuv bagunnavu. Ade chalu. 4 years anta avvakottey. Backlogs padina em kadu. Malli rasukovachu. Free ga chaduvko.”
Annitiki vuu kotti dosalu tinesa. Hall lo mavayya ready ga unnadu. Ayanatho matladdaniki baitiki vellaru. Nenu kuda bags sardukuni baitiki vellabothunte..
VELLIPOTUNNAVA
Devudaa. Inni nelalu em jaragaledhu anukunna. Venakki tirigi chusa. Eppati lane em ledhu akkada.
Avnu annanu. Low voice lo.
MARI NENU? ani adigindhi ammai gonthu.
nuvu ikkade undu
NUVU VELLIPOTHE NENEM CHEYYALI IKKADA
Anthe. Body antha pattesinattu anipinchindi.
NENU KUDA VASTANU. NUVU LEKUNDA ASSALU UNDALENU.
Aa voice na chuttu tirugutunnatu anipinchindi.
raku. Ikkade undu.
MMM. SARE IKKADE UNDIPOTHANU. NA MATA EPPUDDU VINNAVANI..
Nenu room baitiki vellipoyanu. Amma nanna navvukuntu matladtunnaru mavayya tho.
Mavayya nannu chusi “antha ok na krishna”
Nenu tala adinchanu.
Nanna “ orey, mavayya entha sepu wait chestadraa. Raa twaraga. Padha bava” annadu.
Andaram baitaki kadilaam. Nanna mavayya mundhu veltunnaru, amma matram bubblegum laga nannu athukkuni undi.
Venaka nunchi navvu vinipinchindi. Nannu nenu thittukuntu baitiki vellanu. Amma nanna badhani moham midha chupinchakunda normal ga undataniki try chestunnaru. Malli jagratha list okati cheppi car ekkincharu. Front lo passenger seat lo kurchunna. Amma nanna bye cheptunnaru. Nenu cheyyi oopakunda silent ga kurchunna. Iddaru na bungamoothi chusi navvukunnaru. Sare ani mavayya car start chesi ponistunadu. Amma nanna ni vadilesi veltunna badha kante, vere edo ekkuva ibbandhi pedtundi. Mavayya ni car apamani cheppi baitiki digaanu.
Nanna entra emaindi ani adigadu.
Nenu chitikina velu chupinchi intloki parigethaanu. Na room loki velli door lock chesesa. Room antha silent ga undi.
Raa annanu.
Oka vekili navvu vinipinchindi.
baitiki velli malli amma nanna ki bye cheppi, malli jagrathalu vini car ekkaanu. Mavayya car start chesi ponichaadu. Ipudu konchem relaxed ga undi.
Car vooru daati highway ekkagaane mavayya tana usual uncle style matalu start chesadu. ayana actually disciplined manishi, na daggara konchem cool ga undataniki try chestadu. naku chennai lo psychiatrist appointment ippinchindi ayane. Aa psychiatrist uncle neenu normal ayya ani place change ni suggest chesadu anta mavayya ki.
Kontha travel chesaka highway pakkana apaadu cigarette kosam. Nenu dooram vellaanu. Smoking padadhu naku. Ayana smoke chestuu phone lo matladtunnadu.
ALL THE BEST. na chevilo cheppindi aa voice. Nenu ignore chesi car daggarki vellanu. Ayana kuda call cut chesi ekkaadu.
Emaindi krishna ani adigadu. Nenu silent ga unna.
Mavayya malli start chesadu
“ee year antha bagane gane unnav kada”
“ha mavayya”
Abaddam cheppaanu. Ee year antha em incident jaragakunda undi anukunna. Kani malli repeat avtundi. Okavela cheppeste, malli andaruu tension padtaru. Malli kadha modhatiki ostundi. Malli aa psychiatrist ni kalavali chennai velli. Mavayya recommendation ani veelu lekunna kalpinchkuni marii treat chesadu athanu. Malli aa process antha repeat cheylenu. Oka month vorchukunte clear aipotundhemo. Ela avtundi, intlo vadileykunda venta tiskuni vastunna kada.
“nanna ki leg pain taggutundha mavayya “
“enduku taggadhu ra. Cramp lage adi kuda”
“mari antha sepu em matladav nanna tho?”
“nijam cheppalante, nenu me nanna ni treat chese doctor uncle sitting vesam lopala. Chala rojula tarvata tirupathi vacha ga. Daridrudu night varaku aagaleka akkade tageddham annadu”
Na vaipu chusi “me nanna tagaledhu lera. Ayanaki asalu alavatu ledhu ga”
Nenu chinnaga navvaanu.
Malli ayane “ nuv kuda alane undali. Me nanna laga. Alanti alavatlu cheskoku. Nenu ignore chesinaa, prema vadaldhu”
“ Chala buildup istunnaru me ammai ki. Nenu chusa ga 2 years back”
“apudu veru. Ipudu veru. Nuvve chustav ga”
Oka look ichi, kasepu nidrapodaniki try chesanu. Journey lo bhale nidrapadtundi naku.
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2022.05.23 11:11 safer__sephiroth కృష్ణ మాయ part - 1.1

Vaaram aindi. Nenu vellalsina time aindi. Morning mavayya intiki ochesadu nannu tiskelladaniki. Nenu na academics documents anni sardukuntunte amma nanna room loki ocharu. Valla moham chudalante bayamestundi. Chuste edchestanemo. Amma cheppindi nijame, moodu rojulaki minchi vallani chudakunda epuduu undaledhu. Alantidi nelala tarabadi vere vurlo ante, entha gatti vallakaina badha mamule. Nanna checklist cheptunnaru, nenu annitiki uu kodtunnanu. Amma nannu hug cheskuni edchestundi. Nanna vaipu chusanu. Ayana kallalo neellu.
Nanna emo “osey, vadiki dosalu chesi tinipinchu. Malli epudu thintado ne chethi vanta”
Amma kallu tuduchukuni kitchen ki parugu tisindi. Room lo nenu nanna unnam.
Nanna “ chudu krishna, place marindi ani badhapadaku. Me atha mavayyalu kuda amma nanna lage. Vallaki koduku ledu kabatti ninnu sontha koduku lage chuskuntaru. Prema ki ne vishayam cheppaanu. Tana gurinchi bayapadaku. Tanaki nuvvante lopala abhimaname. Final ga, ekkuva stress avvaku. Bayapadaku. Athaya unnaru, mavayya unnaru, prema undi. Phone cheste mem kuda unnam nitho. Nuv chala gattodivi ra, anduke inka peaceful ga unnav”
Inthalo amma ochindi vedi vedi dosalu plate lo veskuni. Nanna edo cheptunnadu kani amma dosalu tinipistunte em teliyatledhu. Entha bavunnai, malli epudu ochi thintano emo.
Amma start chesindi “nanna antha sutthi cheptadu kani. Nenu short and sweet ga chepta. Monna mahesh babu cinemalo cheppinattu. Nikante thopu evadu ledu ikkada. Anthe. Ne chaduvu damage aindi kani, nuv bagunnavu. Ade chalu. 4 years anta avvakottey. Backlogs padina em kadu. Malli rasukovachu. Free ga chaduvko.”
Annitiki vuu kotti dosalu tinesa. Hall lo mavayya ready ga unnadu. Ayanatho matladdaniki baitiki vellaru. Nenu kuda bags sardukuni baitiki vellabothunte..
VELLIPOTUNNAVA
Devudaa. Inni nelalu em jaragaledhu anukunna. Venakki tirigi chusa. Eppati lane em ledhu akkada.
Avnu annanu. Low voice lo.
MARI NENU? ani adigindhi ammai gonthu.
nuvu ikkade undu
NUVU VELLIPOTHE NENEM CHEYYALI IKKADA
Anthe. Body antha pattesinattu anipinchindi.
NENU KUDA VASTANU. NUVU LEKUNDA ASSALU UNDALENU.
Aa voice na chuttu tirugutunnatu anipinchindi.
raku. Ikkade undu.
MMM. SARE IKKADE UNDIPOTHANU. NA MATA EPPUDDU VINNAVANI..
Nenu room baitiki vellipoyanu. Amma nanna navvukuntu matladtunnaru mavayya tho.
Mavayya nannu chusi “antha ok na krishna”
Nenu tala adinchanu.
Nanna “ orey, mavayya entha sepu wait chestadraa. Raa twaraga. Padha bava” annadu.
Andaram baitaki kadilaam. Nanna mavayya mundhu veltunnaru, amma matram bubblegum laga nannu athukkuni undi.
Venaka nunchi navvu vinipinchindi. Nannu nenu thittukuntu baitiki vellanu. Amma nanna badhani moham midha chupinchakunda normal ga undataniki try chestunnaru. Malli jagratha list okati cheppi car ekkincharu. Front lo passenger seat lo kurchunna. Amma nanna bye cheptunnaru. Nenu cheyyi oopakunda silent ga kurchunna. Iddaru na bungamoothi chusi navvukunnaru. Sare ani mavayya car start chesi ponistunadu. Amma nanna ni vadilesi veltunna badha kante, vere edo ekkuva ibbandhi pedtundi. Mavayya ni car apamani cheppi baitiki digaanu.
Nanna entra emaindi ani adigadu.
Nenu chitikina velu chupinchi intloki parigethaanu. Na room loki velli door lock chesesa. Room antha silent ga undi.
Raa annanu.
Oka vekili navvu vinipinchindi.
baitiki velli malli amma nanna ki bye cheppi, malli jagrathalu vini car ekkaanu. Mavayya car start chesi ponichaadu. Ipudu konchem relaxed ga undi.
Car vooru daati highway ekkagaane mavayya tana usual uncle style matalu start chesadu. ayana actually disciplined manishi, na daggara konchem cool ga undataniki try chestadu. naku chennai lo psychiatrist appointment ippinchindi ayane. Aa psychiatrist uncle neenu normal ayya ani place change ni suggest chesadu anta mavayya ki.
Kontha travel chesaka highway pakkana apaadu cigarette kosam. Nenu dooram vellaanu. Smoking padadhu naku. Ayana smoke chestuu phone lo matladtunnadu.
ALL THE BEST. na chevilo cheppindi aa voice. Nenu ignore chesi car daggarki vellanu. Ayana kuda call cut chesi ekkaadu.
Emaindi krishna ani adigadu. Nenu silent ga unna.
Mavayya malli start chesadu
“ee year antha bagane gane unnav kada”
“ha mavayya”
Abaddam cheppaanu. Ee year antha em incident jaragakunda undi anukunna. Kani malli repeat avtundi. Okavela cheppeste, malli andaruu tension padtaru. Malli kadha modhatiki ostundi. Malli aa psychiatrist ni kalavali chennai velli. Mavayya recommendation ani veelu lekunna kalpinchkuni marii treat chesadu athanu. Malli aa process antha repeat cheylenu. Oka month vorchukunte clear aipotundhemo. Ela avtundi, intlo vadileykunda venta tiskuni vastunna kada.
“nanna ki leg pain taggutundha mavayya “
“enduku taggadhu ra. Cramp lage adi kuda”
“mari antha sepu em matladav nanna tho?”
“nijam cheppalante, nenu me nanna ni treat chese doctor uncle sitting vesam lopala. Chala rojula tarvata tirupathi vacha ga. Daridrudu night varaku aagaleka akkade tageddham annadu”
Na vaipu chusi “me nanna tagaledhu lera. Ayanaki asalu alavatu ledhu ga”
Nenu chinnaga navvaanu.
Malli ayane “ nuv kuda alane undali. Me nanna laga. Alanti alavatlu cheskoku. Nenu ignore chesinaa, prema vadaldhu”
“ Chala buildup istunnaru me ammai ki. Nenu chusa ga 2 years back”
“apudu veru. Ipudu veru. Nuvve chustav ga”
Oka look ichi, kasepu nidrapodaniki try chesanu. Journey lo bhale nidrapadtundi naku.
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2022.01.09 04:27 Srilalitha as posted last week my hand in story writing this part 2

TLDR: How hero n heroine take small decisions to make a big change in their futures .
Hi all ,i am trying to write a serial/novel and planning to write in blog.but meanwhile i wanted to check whether i really can write and get as many feedbacks as possible.i got a couple of them in my last post and will definitely implement them in my next one but for this i just wanted to keep up the motivation to write .
Abhijit ni first time choosidhi , language class lo .thana roll number eppudu rendu sections Madhya oorike thippevaaru so finally vachi abhi valla section lo vachi padindhi. Hero emo 1st bench lo kurchuni shradha ga paatalu vine type,heroine emo last bench lo kurchoni notebook lo conversations carry on chese type.alaantidhi aa roju jarigina sections shuffling gandaragolam lo Abhijit emo last but one bench lo kaani mana heroine consistent ga last bench lo undhi.
Abhijit maatiki okasaari vaalla bench vaipu choodatam choosi suryakantham ki ardham kaaledhu emmayyindha ani. Appati daaka surykantham ni choosi reverse lo paripoyare kaani evaru aame ni mari mari choodaledhu anduke mana heroine kuda okasaari kannarpakunda choosindhi,athanni. Mana hero ventane thadabadi moham thippesukunnadu ee lopala , suryakantham ee lokam lo unnau ani arichindhi vaalla amma. Takkuna thala thippi choosthe tea cup pattukuni valla amma undhi, vaalla inti terrace medha .em alochisthunnave antha serious ga ani adigesariki em anaalo ardham kaaka oka verri navvu navvi,amma pelli chesukovatam enduku, happy ga single ga undochu ga.nenu evarni choodale pelli chesukuni happy ga unna vallani ani adigindhi. Nee bonda nuvvu nee chetha prashnalu , ippatiki inka pelli guirnchi alochistha ante tharavatha alochinchatame miguluthundhi, ani serious ga ani. malli mellaga ala kaadhamma malli makemanna ayithe nuvvu okkadaanivi ayipothau manaki ippudu evaru akkarle anipisthundhi kaani oka vayasu daataka ,mana thoti vallu andaru evari jeevithallo vaallu busy ayipoyaaka appudu,neeku aa shunyam ardham avuthundhi.ala ani maa kosam pelli chesukoku,chesukonu ante memu godava cheyyam but think a lot before you take decision, anesi calm ayyi,chetla ki neellu posee pani pettukuntaaru aavida. Suryakantham malli alochanaalo pade lopu sulochana paiki vasthunattu pillala arupula tho ardham ayyi inka Abhijit alochana pakkana petti vallani choosi hi cheppe lope pillalu iddaru choottesaaru ,pinniii ani.suryakantham entho santhosham ga vaallani ethukuni entha pedda vaallu ayyaru asalu ani antundhi.iddaru aameki muddu petti choclatesss ani arusthaaru aame chevilo.ee lopu sulochana vachi iddarni thidthundhi pinni kosam vachaara choclates kosam aa ani. Pillalu malli chooclatess ani arusthaaru ,surykantham thala venakki vanchi peddaga navvesi ,ponleve thecchindhi vaalla kosam ee ga ani,kinda thaatha unnadu aayanani adagandi ani, sulochana ni gatti ga hug chesukuni,enni rojulu ayyindhi ninnu choosi anukuni iddaru okka nimisham full emotional ayipothaaru,ee lopu suryakantham valla amma ventane ,abba kya scene hai anesariki iddaru navvesi ,mellaga kurchuntaaru. Sulochana mellaga evo kaburlu cheothunte, suryakantham chinnaga vaalla amma ki vinapadakunda antundhi ee roju Abhijit ni choosa airport lo ani ventane sulochana gatti ga entiiiii anesariki ushhhhhh ani gilli,suryakantham ,aagu tharvatha cheptha ani . amma deeniki tea kavalanta koncham alaage emanna snacks kuda please ante aavida sare sare meeru secrets matladukovaali ani cheppu naakenduku pani pedathau, ani amma sulochana nuvvayina cheppu koncham daaniki pelli antene moham maadusthondhi ,repu pelli choopulaki vache vaallu em anukuntaaru ani kindaki vellipothundhi. Sulochana ente aunty pelli choopulu antunnaru nuvuu Abhijit antunnau malla monna athanevaro nuvvu leka nenu lenu ani paatalu padaadu annau.Asalem jaruguthondhi antundhi kangaru ga.nuvvantha kangaru padaku Ramana chaala serious unnadu to maary me kaani nene emi decide avvalekapothunna,antundhi.em maayarogam ee neeku ,athanu entha manchi vaadu ,chakkati job and well settled anniti kante nuvvante entha prema ante.suryakantham ki chirakochi ehe ente prema oorike prema prema. Athanu aa peru tho oorike possessive untaade .naa sangathi telusu kada emanna ante job lo male colleagues tho matladodhu valla intentions manchivi kaadhu antaadu, ledhu bayataki veldhaam ekkadikaina ante eppudu thanatho ne vellali antaadu ,emanna ardham undhaa aa so called prema lo ani gattiga antundhi. Ee lopu valla pakkinti aunty battalu theeyataniki paiki vachi ,pallu ikilinchukuntu emma suryakantham baunnavaa eppudochau enti edho prema prema antunnau kompadeesi evarinanina preminchaavaa antundhi buggalu nokkukuntuu.nee yenkamma eemekem maayarogam ippudila vachindhi,donga mokham dhi em vindho ento anukuni paiki ala em ledhu aunty, edho naa friend vasthe casual topics discuss chesthunnam ,meerela unnaraunty anelopu sulochana andukoni ala kaadhu aunty meeru uncle eppudu challa prema ga untaranta ga suryam ki kullu ga undhanta adhe chepthondhi anesariki aavidaki punch ardham ayyi sare amma mee uncle vache time ayyindhi ,mee friend vellipoyaaka raa maa intiki okasaari ani vellipothundhi. Iddaru mohaalu choosukuni,kiuskkumani navvukuntaaru. Mellaga kallu therichi choosesariki bayata antha cheekati ga kanipisthundhi Abhijit ki .okkasaari time choosukuni ,Anjali daggara ninchi chaala missed calls undesariki takkuna lechi urgent ga aameki call chesthadu,emayyindha ani . Anjali phone lift chesi emayipoyau ,message ledhu em ledhu,almost one and half day ayyindhi anesariki okka nimisham blank ayyi enti anukuni choosthe nijame almost 24 hours kante ekkuva padukunnadu thanu. Ventane emo Anjali asalu nidra pattesindhi I did not even know asalu.ante sare sare bane unnau ga …meeku akkada night ga inka continue cheyyi malla ellundi office ki vellali ..morning lechaaka cheyyi,appudu matladukundham ani pettesthundhi.valla amma ki kuda call chesi bane unnanu ani cheppesi inkoka maata ki chance ivvakunda is the ekkada pelli sambandhalu antundho ani pettesi inka chuttu choosthe koncham dooram lo full deep sleep lo unna Prasad kanipisthaadu. Vaadni gattiga gillesariki amma babaoi nallulu unnayi ikkada ani aruchukuntu lechi .abhijit ni choosi orey nenu nee girlfriend ni kaadhu ra ante nee bonda nannu enduku lepale ani adigesariki ossss adhaa..nuvvemo kadhalanu kuda kadhalkunda padukunnau, madhyalo kanthamma kanthamma antunte nee girlfriend gurinchi kalalu kantunnau emo enduku disturb cheyyatam anukunna ,ayina kanthamma entra antha old name anesariki nee moham le ani Abhijit thindi pettara babu urgent ga ante.kitchen lo undhi choosuko ani malli duppati lo musugu thanni guraka start chesthaadu Prasad. Inka mellaga lechi kaastha fresh ayyi ,room lo ninchi bayataki vachesariki akkada mugguru ammailu n iddaru abbailu chaala serious ga edho discuss chethu untaaru. Ee lopu oka ammai mana hero ni choosi ,hi kumbakarma finally you woke ani navvuthu palakaristhundhi. Mana hero ki mamoolugane maatalu thondharaga raavu,paiga palakarinchindhi andhamaina ammai, inkem sound lekunda oka smile isthaadu.aa ammai abba em navvaru darling..urgent ga muthyalu eerukunta ani anesariki debbaki Abhijit ki bhayam esi em analeka thinataniki em undhi ani akkada kanapadthunna Prasad roommate ni aduguthaadu.malle aa ammai ee (peru vennela),meekem kavali ,nenu vandutha ippude antundhi chaala serious ga moham petti.pakkane unna thana friend ,nuvvu vandithe aayana inka nidra lavadu enduku athanini bhayapedthunnau ani.table meedha undhandi,food order chesindhe .eat how much ever you want ani malla valla converstaions lo munigipothaaru. Abhijit velli plate lo aa food pettukuni ,edho ph lo choosukuntuu thintunte,vennela vachi eduru chair lo kurchoni ,malli navvuthundhi hi ani cheyyi ooputhu. Ori nayano ee pilla ki emanna crack aa anukuni , jst hi ani ,malli phone lo ki choodabothe.nenevaro gurthu pattaledhaaa antundhi. Ventane Abhijit phone pakkana petti malli aa ammai ni choosi, hey nuvvu 2nd section venni vi kada nuvvu,enti inthala maaripoyaau assalu gurthu pattale antaadu. Vennela navvesi nuvvem maarale anduke ala matladaanu.enti neeku line esthunna anukunnava antundhi pakapaka navvuthu.naa moham value naaku telusu nuvvu gurthu cheyyakarle, naakem ardham kale anduke pichi moham vesukuni itu vachesaa antaadu, Abhijit.vennela ventane andukuni I don’t think sun people sorry some people have different opinion antundhi .abhijit dannam petti thalli nenu bane unnanu,ippatiki ila bathakanivvu ani enti nuvikkada ante, job ikkade ,plus maa fiancé kuda ikkade job so itite thiruguthaam ani.repu lechaka raa maa intiki pakka building ee,manam kuulankasham ga kshema samachaaraalu matladukundham ani ,bye cheppi malla a gumpu lo kurchuntundhi. abhijit ki asalu brain blank ayyi asalu em jaruguthondhi ninna kanthamma ,ee roju venni enti ila shocks vasthunnayi ani ,thinatam finish chesi malli bed medha vaali kallu moosukunte enthaki nidra raadhu,malla Anjali ki chesthaadu ,Anjali ventane lift chesi enti nidra pattaledha ani aduguthundhi.abhijit ledhu thinataniki velthe vennela kanapadindhi ,naaku fuse out antaadu. Enti thinataniki ekkadakaina bayataki vellava ante ledhu just bed ninchi hall lo ki vellanu antaadu.anjali vekkirimpu ga navvi inka nayyam nee darling kuda kanapadindhi ani cheppale, ante abhinjit guess what antaadu.anjali stun ayipoyi, seriously antundhi. Anjali nijam gane shock avuthundhi .entidhi innallu lenidhi aa pilla kanapadatam enti malli school friends kanapadatam enti ,asalu em jaruguthondhi ani koncham tension padthundhi.paiki aa feelings emi kanapadanivvakunda seriously ? mari palakarinchakapoyaava antundhi chinnaga navvuthuu, antha telise ila antunnava , em palakarinchaali ante sare sare kopam thechukoku emayina maarindha asalu ekkada kanapadindhi ani inka evo questions veselopu ,chinnaga door knock vinpadithe Abhijit aagu ani door theesthe bayata vennela ,padukokapothe kaasepu maatho kuda matladochu ani enti girlfriend aa disturb chesaana antundhi.ventane Abhijit chacha ala em ledhu ani,phone lo Anjali tho malli chestha ani pettesthaadu. Debbaki anjali ki eduposthundhi.entidhi kaneesam friends ki kuda thinnaga nannu girlfriend ani oppukoleni manishi kosam enduku ila pichi daanila untunna ani kallalo neellu kaaruthunte thuduchukuntu , mellaga fresh ayyi, bayataki velthundhi vaalla friends ni meet avudham ani.phone intlone pettesi.thanu chesina thappento telusukuni ventane Abhijit call chesthaadu sorry chepdhaam ani.enni saarlu chesina lift cheyakapoyesariki inka kopam vachindhemo ani aaguthaadu. Bayata vennela eduru choosthondhi ani inka hall lo ki velthaadu. Mundhu thana fiancé ni parichayam chesthundhi, podugga revu la thati chettu la podugga ,potlakaaya la sannaga unnadu ,peru vikranth ani, edho pedda company lo manager la chesthunnadani edho koncham dabba kottukuntaadu. abhijit vennela vanka chesthaadu gurru ga,enti ee sodhi kosam ramannava annattu. Sare ila kaadhani vennela mellaga vikranth ,athaya ki chesthaa annau call velli chesi ra lekapothe malla kangaroo padatharu ante,correct ee kada ,thanks kutty guthu chesaau ani vennela bugga gilli pakkaki vellipothadu. Vennela ok ok nannu thittaku,athaniki koncham insecurity ekkuva daani covering ki ila dabba kottukovatam naa abbai friends mundhu and ila anadarilo koncham affection choopsithadu ,manishi manchode antundhi.abhijit chinnaga navvuthu ,nenemanna annaana asalu,just ala vinnaanu anthe ante,babu nee sangathi evariki theliyadhu ,okka choopu chaalu laksha thittlu vethukovachu ani neeku maa surya ne correct ani inthaki thanatho ne na matladuthondhi indaaka, edho covering ichau kaani kanipettesaa nenu antundhi. Ventane chiraakosthundhi Abhijit ki ayina kanapadanivvakunda, ledhu Anjali ani naa close friend infact girlfriend ani cheppochu antaadu.tide avakkayara la avvakku ayyi enti surya ki neeku em ayyindhi antundhi.you guys were sooo ani inka maata finish chese lopu, vikranth vachi enti school friends full involve ayipoyaaru kaburlalo ani aduguthaadu.vennela ki em cheppalo ardham kaka aa anelopu,Abhijit andukoni yeah naa grielfriend gurinchi chepthunna antaadu. Vikrath moham lo relief choosi chichi ani manasulo anukuni,paiki sare venni ,repu meet avudham ,I will try to sleep ani room lo ki vellipothadu.stun ayina vennela ki em information ivvakundane. Thanu vennela ki clarity ivvakapovatam entha pedda twist isthundho thana life lo appudu telusunte, appude kurchopetti ventane details cheppe vaadu emo. Ala bhavishyathu mundhe telise powers levu kabbati Abhijit malli okasaari Anjali ki call chesi lift cheyyakapoyesariki, sorry ani oka message type chesi malli enduko delete chesi, kudirinappudu call cheyyi,matladaali ani petti .phone pakkana padesi, suryakantha navvu ni kalla mundhu ranivvakunda undaatniki try chesthu nidra loki velthadu. Aa rojantha akkade unna sulochana ,inka night ki dinner chesi start avudham anukuntunte pillalu iddaru edusthaaru,memu pinni tho ne untaam ani.sulochana edho anaboyentha lo suryakantham valla amma ,undanivvu thalli repetu nuvvu ravali kaastha mee friend ki help cheyyataaniki appudu theesukuni vellule ante ,surykantham kuda undanivvu leve, malla school hadavidi start ayithe eppatiki kanapadatharo anesariki chesedhem leka sulochana ,pillalni akkade odhilesi valla intiki bhayalu deruthundhi. next day inka afternoon varaku malli vachesthundhi.vache sariki scene choosi padi padi navvuthundhi entaa ante iddaru pillala Madhya kurchoni vallidaru ekki thokkuthunte ,juttu peekuthunte ala calm ga kurchunna kopishti suryakantham nijam ga thana friend aa leka ekkadayina thappipoyi eeme vere aamena ani doubt vachi,ente asalu em anakunda ala kurchunnau,nee avatharam choosukunnava ante.em cheyyamantau , pelli ki mental preparation la useful ani ala kurchunna antundhi,mana gayyali suryakantham. Pelli choopulaki vache vaallu evening vasthaaru ani call vasthundhi suryakantham valla amma ki .aavida inka hadavidi moshalu pettesthundhi.Suryakantham gattiga nitturchi,ishtam lekapoyina light pink color saree daniki contrast blouse vesukuni ,simple ha oka pearls set pettukuntundhi. antha simple ga ready avvatam choosi valla amma ki kopam vachina sare ila kuda baundhi le anukuni,inka snacks avi ready chese pani lo padthundhi. sulochana pillalu full sandhadi chesthaaru , surykantham ready avvatam choosi. Inka sulochana kuda aunty ki (adhenandi surykantham valla amma) help chesi aa ammai kuda fresh ayyi andaritho paatu kurchuntundhi evari alochanallo vaallu undipoyi,silent ga.ee lopu bayata car vachina sound ki andaru ullikipadi mellaga vasthavaaniki(reality) vachi , uncle (suryakantham valla naanna andi) bayataki velli vaallani lopalaki theesukuni vasthaadu.suryakantham eto alochisthu pelli koduku photo choodale so pelli koduku lopala ki enter avvagane,athani choosi shock avuthundhi. Sulochana suryakantham moham choosi ,pelli koduku vaipu choosi mundhu ascharyapoyinaa, tharvatha malli therukuni ,surykanthaaniki saiga chetshundhi ala kanarpakunda choodatam aapamani.
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2022.01.09 04:16 Srilalitha "the serial" part 3

TLDR: hero n heroine ki pelli avvataniki jarige పరిస్థితులు .
Hi andi, nenochesaa.I have taken all the suggestions i got but unfortunately ee week implement cheyyatam kashtam AYYindhi as i could find time ,but wanted to keep up writing so next week ki will make sure to update with the improvements.ee week ki koncham adjust ayipondi.
Everyone who read the story already can continue from here others can see the parts 1 and 2 in comments.please do read and let me know your feedback.
Abhijit ni first time choosidhi , language class lo .thana roll number eppudu rendu sections Madhya oorike thippevaaru so finally vachi abhi valla section lo vachi padindhi. Hero emo 1st bench lo kurchuni shradha ga paatalu vine type,heroine emo last bench lo kurchoni notebook lo conversations carry on chese type.alaantidhi aa roju jarigina sections shuffling gandaragolam lo Abhijit emo last but one bench lo kaani mana heroine consistent ga last bench lo undhi.
Abhijit maatiki okasaari vaalla bench vaipu choodatam choosi suryakantham ki ardham kaaledhu emmayyindha ani. Appati daaka surykantham ni choosi reverse lo paripoyare kaani evaru aame ni mari mari choodaledhu anduke mana heroine kuda okasaari kannarpakunda choosindhi,athanni. Mana hero ventane thadabadi moham thippesukunnadu ee lopala , suryakantham ee lokam lo unnau ani arichindhi vaalla amma.
Takkuna thala thippi choosthe tea cup pattukuni valla amma undhi, vaalla inti terrace medha .em alochisthunnave antha serious ga ani adigesariki em anaalo ardham kaaka oka verri navvu navvi,amma pelli chesukovatam enduku, happy ga single ga undochu ga.nenu evarni choodale pelli chesukuni happy ga unna vallani ani adigindhi. Nee bonda nuvvu nee chetha prashnalu , ippatiki inka pelli guirnchi alochistha ante tharavatha alochinchatame miguluthundhi, ani serious ga ani. malli mellaga ala kaadhamma malli makemanna ayithe nuvvu okkadaanivi ayipothau manaki ippudu evaru akkarle anipisthundhi kaani oka vayasu daataka ,mana thoti vallu andaru evari jeevithallo vaallu busy ayipoyaaka appudu,neeku aa shunyam ardham avuthundhi.ala ani maa kosam pelli chesukoku,chesukonu ante memu godava cheyyam but think a lot before you take decision, anesi calm ayyi,chetla ki neellu posee pani pettukuntaaru aavida.
Suryakantham malli alochanaalo pade lopu sulochana paiki vasthunattu pillala arupula tho ardham ayyi inka Abhijit alochana pakkana petti vallani choosi hi cheppe lope pillalu iddaru choottesaaru ,pinniii ani.suryakantham entho santhosham ga vaallani ethukuni entha pedda vaallu ayyaru asalu ani antundhi.iddaru aameki muddu petti choclatesss ani arusthaaru aame chevilo.ee lopu sulochana vachi iddarni thidthundhi pinni kosam vachaara choclates kosam aa ani. Pillalu malli chooclatess ani arusthaaru ,surykantham thala venakki vanchi peddaga navvesi ,ponleve thecchindhi vaalla kosam ee ga ani,kinda thaatha unnadu aayanani adagandi ani, sulochana ni gatti ga hug chesukuni,enni rojulu ayyindhi ninnu choosi anukuni iddaru okka nimisham full emotional ayipothaaru,ee lopu suryakantham valla amma ventane ,abba kya scene hai anesariki iddaru navvesi ,mellaga kurchuntaaru.
Sulochana mellaga evo kaburlu cheothunte, suryakantham chinnaga vaalla amma ki vinapadakunda antundhi ee roju Abhijit ni choosa airport lo ani ventane sulochana gatti ga entiiiii anesariki ushhhhhh ani gilli,suryakantham ,aagu tharvatha cheptha ani . amma deeniki tea kavalanta koncham alaage emanna snacks kuda please ante aavida sare sare meeru secrets matladukovaali ani cheppu naakenduku pani pedathau, ani amma sulochana nuvvayina cheppu koncham daaniki pelli antene moham maadusthondhi ,repu pelli choopulaki vache vaallu em anukuntaaru ani kindaki vellipothundhi.
Sulochana ente aunty pelli choopulu antunnaru nuvuu Abhijit antunnau malla monna athanevaro nuvvu leka nenu lenu ani paatalu padaadu annau.Asalem jaruguthondhi antundhi kangaru ga.nuvvantha kangaru padaku Ramana chaala serious unnadu to maary me kaani nene emi decide avvalekapothunna,antundhi.em maayarogam ee neeku ,athanu entha manchi vaadu ,chakkati job and well settled anniti kante nuvvante entha prema ante.suryakantham ki chirakochi ehe ente prema oorike prema prema. Athanu aa peru tho oorike possessive untaade .naa sangathi telusu kada emanna ante job lo male colleagues tho matladodhu valla intentions manchivi kaadhu antaadu, ledhu bayataki veldhaam ekkadikaina ante eppudu thanatho ne vellali antaadu ,emanna ardham undhaa aa so called prema lo ani gattiga antundhi.
Ee lopu valla pakkinti aunty battalu theeyataniki paiki vachi ,pallu ikilinchukuntu emma suryakantham baunnavaa eppudochau enti edho prema prema antunnau kompadeesi evarinanina preminchaavaa antundhi buggalu nokkukuntuu.nee yenkamma eemekem maayarogam ippudila vachindhi,donga mokham dhi em vindho ento anukuni paiki ala em ledhu aunty, edho naa friend vasthe casual topics discuss chesthunnam ,meerela unnaraunty anelopu sulochana andukoni ala kaadhu aunty meeru uncle eppudu challa prema ga untaranta ga suryam ki kullu ga undhanta adhe chepthondhi anesariki aavidaki punch ardham ayyi sare amma mee uncle vache time ayyindhi ,mee friend vellipoyaaka raa maa intiki okasaari ani vellipothundhi. Iddaru mohaalu choosukuni,kiuskkumani navvukuntaaru.
Mellaga kallu therichi choosesariki bayata antha cheekati ga kanipisthundhi Abhijit ki .okkasaari time choosukuni ,Anjali daggara ninchi chaala missed calls undesariki takkuna lechi urgent ga aameki call chesthadu,emayyindha ani . Anjali phone lift chesi emayipoyau ,message ledhu em ledhu,almost one and half day ayyindhi anesariki okka nimisham blank ayyi enti anukuni choosthe nijame almost 24 hours kante ekkuva padukunnadu thanu. Ventane emo Anjali asalu nidra pattesindhi I did not even know asalu.ante sare sare bane unnau ga …meeku akkada night ga inka continue cheyyi malla ellundi office ki vellali ..morning lechaaka cheyyi,appudu matladukundham ani pettesthundhi.valla amma ki kuda call chesi bane unnanu ani cheppesi inkoka maata ki chance ivvakunda is the ekkada pelli sambandhalu antundho ani pettesi inka chuttu choosthe koncham dooram lo full deep sleep lo unna Prasad kanipisthaadu. Vaadni gattiga gillesariki amma babaoi nallulu unnayi ikkada ani aruchukuntu lechi .abhijit ni choosi orey nenu nee girlfriend ni kaadhu ra ante nee bonda nannu enduku lepale ani adigesariki ossss adhaa..nuvvemo kadhalanu kuda kadhalkunda padukunnau, madhyalo kanthamma kanthamma antunte nee girlfriend gurinchi kalalu kantunnau emo enduku disturb cheyyatam anukunna ,ayina kanthamma entra antha old name anesariki nee moham le ani Abhijit thindi pettara babu urgent ga ante.kitchen lo undhi choosuko ani malli duppati lo musugu thanni guraka start chesthaadu Prasad.
Inka mellaga lechi kaastha fresh ayyi ,room lo ninchi bayataki vachesariki akkada mugguru ammailu n iddaru abbailu chaala serious ga edho discuss chethu untaaru. Ee lopu oka ammai mana hero ni choosi ,hi kumbakarma finally you woke ani navvuthu palakaristhundhi. Mana hero ki mamoolugane maatalu thondharaga raavu,paiga palakarinchindhi andhamaina ammai, inkem sound lekunda oka smile isthaadu.aa ammai abba em navvaru darling..urgent ga muthyalu eerukunta ani anesariki debbaki Abhijit ki bhayam esi em analeka thinataniki em undhi ani akkada kanapadthunna Prasad roommate ni aduguthaadu.malle aa ammai ee (peru vennela),meekem kavali ,nenu vandutha ippude antundhi chaala serious ga moham petti.pakkane unna thana friend ,nuvvu vandithe aayana inka nidra lavadu enduku athanini bhayapedthunnau ani.table meedha undhandi,food order chesindhe .eat how much ever you want ani malla valla converstaions lo munigipothaaru.
Abhijit velli plate lo aa food pettukuni ,edho ph lo choosukuntuu thintunte,vennela vachi eduru chair lo kurchoni ,malli navvuthundhi hi ani cheyyi ooputhu. Ori nayano ee pilla ki emanna crack aa anukuni , jst hi ani ,malli phone lo ki choodabothe.nenevaro gurthu pattaledhaaa antundhi. Ventane Abhijit phone pakkana petti malli aa ammai ni choosi, hey nuvvu 2nd section venni vi kada nuvvu,enti inthala maaripoyaau assalu gurthu pattale antaadu. Vennela navvesi nuvvem maarale anduke ala matladaanu.enti neeku line esthunna anukunnava antundhi pakapaka navvuthu.naa moham value naaku telusu nuvvu gurthu cheyyakarle, naakem ardham kale anduke pichi moham vesukuni itu vachesaa antaadu, Abhijit.vennela ventane andukuni I don’t think sun people sorry some people have different opinion antundhi .abhijit dannam petti thalli nenu bane unnanu,ippatiki ila bathakanivvu ani enti nuvikkada ante, job ikkade ,plus maa fiancé kuda ikkade job so itite thiruguthaam ani.repu lechaka raa maa intiki pakka building ee,manam kuulankasham ga kshema samachaaraalu matladukundham ani ,bye cheppi malla a gumpu lo kurchuntundhi.
abhijit ki asalu brain blank ayyi asalu em jaruguthondhi ninna kanthamma ,ee roju venni enti ila shocks vasthunnayi ani ,thinatam finish chesi malli bed medha vaali kallu moosukunte enthaki nidra raadhu,malla Anjali ki chesthaadu ,Anjali ventane lift chesi enti nidra pattaledha ani aduguthundhi.abhijit ledhu thinataniki velthe vennela kanapadindhi ,naaku fuse out antaadu. Enti thinataniki ekkadakaina bayataki vellava ante ledhu just bed ninchi hall lo ki vellanu antaadu.anjali vekkirimpu ga navvi inka nayyam nee darling kuda kanapadindhi ani cheppale, ante abhinjit guess what antaadu.anjali stun ayipoyi, seriously antundhi.
Anjali nijam gane shock avuthundhi .entidhi innallu lenidhi aa pilla kanapadatam enti malli school friends kanapadatam enti ,asalu em jaruguthondhi ani koncham tension padthundhi.paiki aa feelings emi kanapadanivvakunda seriously ? mari palakarinchakapoyaava antundhi chinnaga navvuthuu, antha telise ila antunnava , em palakarinchaali ante sare sare kopam thechukoku emayina maarindha asalu ekkada kanapadindhi ani inka evo questions veselopu ,chinnaga door knock vinpadithe Abhijit aagu ani door theesthe bayata vennela ,padukokapothe kaasepu maatho kuda matladochu ani enti girlfriend aa disturb chesaana antundhi.ventane Abhijit chacha ala em ledhu ani,phone lo Anjali tho malli chestha ani pettesthaadu.
Debbaki anjali ki eduposthundhi.entidhi kaneesam friends ki kuda thinnaga nannu girlfriend ani oppukoleni manishi kosam enduku ila pichi daanila untunna ani kallalo neellu kaaruthunte thuduchukuntu , mellaga fresh ayyi, bayataki velthundhi vaalla friends ni meet avudham ani.phone intlone pettesi.thanu chesina thappento telusukuni ventane Abhijit call chesthaadu sorry chepdhaam ani.enni saarlu chesina lift cheyakapoyesariki inka kopam vachindhemo ani aaguthaadu.
Bayata vennela eduru choosthondhi ani inka hall lo ki velthaadu. Mundhu thana fiancé ni parichayam chesthundhi, podugga revu la thati chettu la podugga ,potlakaaya la sannaga unnadu ,peru vikranth ani, edho pedda company lo manager la chesthunnadani edho koncham dabba kottukuntaadu. abhijit vennela vanka chesthaadu gurru ga,enti ee sodhi kosam ramannava annattu. Sare ila kaadhani vennela mellaga vikranth ,athaya ki chesthaa annau call velli chesi ra lekapothe malla kangaroo padatharu ante,correct ee kada ,thanks kutty guthu chesaau ani vennela bugga gilli pakkaki vellipothadu.
Vennela ok ok nannu thittaku,athaniki koncham insecurity ekkuva daani covering ki ila dabba kottukovatam naa abbai friends mundhu and ila anadarilo koncham affection choopsithadu ,manishi manchode antundhi.abhijit chinnaga navvuthu ,nenemanna annaana asalu,just ala vinnaanu anthe ante,babu nee sangathi evariki theliyadhu ,okka choopu chaalu laksha thittlu vethukovachu ani neeku maa surya ne correct ani inthaki thanatho ne na matladuthondhi indaaka, edho covering ichau kaani kanipettesaa nenu antundhi.
Ventane chiraakosthundhi Abhijit ki ayina kanapadanivvakunda, ledhu Anjali ani naa close friend infact girlfriend ani cheppochu antaadu.tide avakkayara la avvakku ayyi enti surya ki neeku em ayyindhi antundhi.you guys were sooo ani inka maata finish chese lopu, vikranth vachi enti school friends full involve ayipoyaaru kaburlalo ani aduguthaadu.vennela ki em cheppalo ardham kaka aa anelopu,Abhijit andukoni yeah naa grielfriend gurinchi chepthunna antaadu. Vikrath moham lo relief choosi chichi ani manasulo anukuni,paiki sare venni ,repu meet avudham ,I will try to sleep ani room lo ki vellipothadu.stun ayina vennela ki em information ivvakundane.
Thanu vennela ki clarity ivvakapovatam entha pedda twist isthundho thana life lo appudu telusunte, appude kurchopetti ventane details cheppe vaadu emo. Ala bhavishyathu mundhe telise powers levu kabbati Abhijit malli okasaari Anjali ki call chesi lift cheyyakapoyesariki, sorry ani oka message type chesi malli enduko delete chesi, kudirinappudu call cheyyi,matladaali ani petti .phone pakkana padesi, suryakantha navvu ni kalla mundhu ranivvakunda undaatniki try chesthu nidra loki velthadu.
Aa rojantha akkade unna sulochana ,inka night ki dinner chesi start avudham anukuntunte pillalu iddaru edusthaaru,memu pinni tho ne untaam ani.sulochana edho anaboyentha lo suryakantham valla amma ,undanivvu thalli repetu nuvvu ravali kaastha mee friend ki help cheyyataaniki appudu theesukuni vellule ante ,surykantham kuda undanivvu leve, malla school hadavidi start ayithe eppatiki kanapadatharo anesariki chesedhem leka sulochana ,pillalni akkade odhilesi valla intiki bhayalu deruthundhi.
next day inka afternoon varaku malli vachesthundhi.vache sariki scene choosi padi padi navvuthundhi entaa ante iddaru pillala Madhya kurchoni vallidaru ekki thokkuthunte ,juttu peekuthunte ala calm ga kurchunna kopishti suryakantham nijam ga thana friend aa leka ekkadayina thappipoyi eeme vere aamena ani doubt vachi,ente asalu em anakunda ala kurchunnau,nee avatharam choosukunnava ante.em cheyyamantau , pelli ki mental preparation la useful ani ala kurchunna antundhi,mana gayyali suryakantham.
Pelli choopulaki vache vaallu evening vasthaaru ani call vasthundhi suryakantham valla amma ki .aavida inka hadavidi moshalu pettesthundhi.Suryakantham gattiga nitturchi,ishtam lekapoyina light pink color saree daniki contrast blouse vesukuni ,simple ha oka pearls set pettukuntundhi. antha simple ga ready avvatam choosi valla amma ki kopam vachina sare ila kuda baundhi le anukuni,inka snacks avi ready chese pani lo padthundhi. sulochana pillalu full sandhadi chesthaaru , surykantham ready avvatam choosi.
Inka sulochana kuda aunty ki (adhenandi surykantham valla amma) help chesi aa ammai kuda fresh ayyi andaritho paatu kurchuntundhi evari alochanallo vaallu undipoyi,silent ga.ee lopu bayata car vachina sound ki andaru ullikipadi mellaga vasthavaaniki(reality) vachi , uncle (suryakantham valla naanna andi) bayataki velli vaallani lopalaki theesukuni vasthaadu.suryakantham eto alochisthu pelli koduku photo choodale so pelli koduku lopala ki enter avvagane,athani choosi shock avuthundhi. Sulochana suryakantham moham choosi ,pelli koduku vaipu choosi mundhu ascharyapoyinaa, tharvatha malli therukuni ,surykanthaaniki saiga chetshundhi ala kanarpakunda choodatam aapamani.
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2022.01.03 10:15 Srilalitha Trying my hand at story writing and looking for feedbacks.planning to post a part every week. please do let me know.

ghanta ninchi idhe page chadhuvuthu frustrate avuthondhi mana heroine (surya kantham) .okate alochana thinesthondhi thanani "what if what if what if".Sare entha alochinchina solve avvani problem ani odhilesi mellaga pusthakam pakkana petti,lechindhi tea pettukundham ani.
ee lopu phone vachindhi evara ani choosthe Vaalla amma ninchi. abba anukuntu lift chesi chepamma ante,ente em alochinchau cheppina vishayam,malli nene call chesi adagala ? andhi koncham gadhimpu ga.ala em ledhamma nene chedham anukunna ee lopu nuvve chesau ani cover chesukuni ! alochinchechenduku emi ledhu mee ishtam inka andhi. maa ishtam ee ayyetttattu unte ninnu enduku inni saarly adugutha ,baaga alochinchuko tharvatha malli mammalni anakudadhu andhi vaalla amma .aa sarle enna anakapoyina jarigedhe jaruguthundhi ga ani call cut chesindhi.
inthaki surykanthaniki vachina samsya enti ante pelli.pelli lo em samasya anakandi.aameki pelle pedda samsya la ayyindhi, endukante aameki pelli meedha abbai la meedha peddaga nammakam ledhu ala ani chesukonu ante ,urgent ga vaallamma auto matladukuni vachi marii kodthundhi poni ikkade undipodhama ante (ikkade ante parayi desam lo)peddaga emi levu which is making her to stop n stay.paiga daridram udhyogam ippude poyindhi poni elagolaaga nettukodhaam ante.
ila kaadhu ani thana bestfriend ayina sulochana ki call chesindhi. lift cheyyatame pillala kekalu deeni arupulu vini abba kishkindhakanda anukuni call cut chese lopu sulochana hello cheppave call chesi matladau andhi,em matladaali naa bonda, nee pillala edupule sari kada andhi suryakantham visugga.sarleve aveppudu undve cheppu enti intha late ga chesau em mood baledha andhi sulochana,ledhe ippude amma chesindhi ,telusu ga aa sodhi em cheyyalo theliyaka call chesaa neeku andhi. itu vasthe pelli jaripe pamputhaaru mee parents kabatti alochinchuko malla regret avvochu andhi sulochana. naaku teluse kaani asalu ikkade undalanipinchatle n scope kuda ledhu job poyindhi ga ante.inka ne vacheyyi ,tharavtha sangathi tharvatha andhi sulochana.
sare inka risk theesukovalsindhe ani surykantham anni sadhukuni ,ikkadi friends andariki farewell cheppi ,inka mathrubhoomi ki bhayaderindhi.
client vallu thega gola mee desaaniki ra maa desaaniki raa ani ,sare veldhama ante 24 hours prayanam ,naa valla kaadhu ra babu ani malli unna udhyogam lo ivanni thappadhu ga anukuni sare veltha ani cheppadu valla manager tho mana hero abhijit.
ikkada cheppukovalsina vishayam enti ante suryakantham vache roju , mana hero flight ekke roju okate.
inka abhijit valla amma ki call chesi cheppadu ila velle oppututnity vachindhi ani ,inka anthe aavda egiri ganthesi,neeku inka boledu sambadhaalu vasthaayi ,hammayya naaku koncham tension thaggindhi anesariki, abhijit ki chirakochindhi.edho naa talent ki recognition la opputuinity vachindhi ani chepdham ani call chesthe ,pelli pelli ani antundhenti eevida asalu enti ee pelli gola ani.
valla amma tho matladaka brain motham off ayyindhi ani inkoka call chesadu.ring ayina ventane lift chesi oka ammai hello cheppu abbulu em annaru maa atha andi,ventane abhijit ehe aavida vaayimpe ante malla nee gola enti aaputhaava anesariki, aa ammai ayyo abbulu ala em le joke chesa ,cheppava aunty ki us gurinchi ante yeah ,inkem undhi pelli pelli ani start chesindhi annadu. sare adhi manaki telisindhe ga, sare office ayyaka vacheyyi , naa room ki ,prashantham ga matladukundham ani cheppu pettesindhi aa ammai,anjali.
call cut chesi Anjali alochanalo padindhi.veellu kalisi daggara daggara 5 years ayyindhi and relationship anukuni kuda 3 years daatindhi kaani abhi eppudu pelli topic vachina ,just gets irritated.entha hurt ayina vallayina they will heal n recover but endhuko abhi ee vishayam lo asaalu maaratle.thanu sarle modatlone em balavantha pedadham anukundhi kaani ponu ponu bhayam vesthundhi endukante thanaki abhi ante pranam ala ani society ki eduru fight cheyyaledhu .
ippitiki thanaki gurthe vaallu modati saari kalisinappudu abhi ki ippati abhi ki entha maarpo aa dhairyam tho ne thaninka wait chesthondhi.anjaliki modati saari choosinappude nachesadu abhijit.enduko thanki theliyadhu kaani abhijit ni odhala budhi kaale anduke modatlo thanu pattinchukokapoyina ,vinipinchukokapoyina chaala jagrathaga abhijit chuttu thana prapanchanni set chesukundhi.
office ayyaka urgent ga velli anjali ni kalisaadu abhijit.velli vellatame gattiga hug chesukuni anjali ni ,naaku ekkadaki vellalani ledhu evarni pelli chesukovalani ledhu,happy ga manam iddaram ekkadikaina velli prashantham ga live in undham antaadu .Ventane anjali mellaga aa hug ninchi vidipoyi ,enduku babu pellante neeku antha kangaru ,inni years ninchi choosthunnau inka naa meedha nammakam raledha ante,anjali please naaku pelli ante nammakam ledu ani telise kada manam ee relationship start chesaam malli entidhi ani visugga balcony lo ki velthaadu abhijit.Anjali navvukuni iddariki tea theesukuni velli oka cup thanaki ichi ,sare sare nee 1st love gurinchi telusu le kaani inka odhilesi ,lets discuss something else ani mellaga abhijit mood maarusthundhi.
mellaga Abhijit velle roju raane vasthundhi .Airport ki evvarni raavodhu ani cheppi friend ni drop cheyyamani airport lo digi luggage theesukuni nadavatam start chesthuu sudden ga aagipothaadu ,endukante eduru ga suryakantham valla naanatho edho joke vesukuntu edurupaduthundhi.
Suryakantham abhijit ni choodagaane , 1st ekkado choosane anukuni next gurthupatti palakarinche lopu ,abhijit koncham fast ga naduchukuntu mundhuki vellipothaadu.Are enti ithanu eppudu naatho matladadu em pogaro anukuni odhilesi,valla anna evara abbai ani adigithe naa school mate nana ,chaala amnchi abbai kaani enduko eppudu naatho matladadu ani vallu mundhu ki vellipotharu.
abhijit ki inka aa brain block poledhu.asalu nijam ga suryakanthanne na choosindhi ani doubt vachi malli malli venakki choosaadu.Aa thala venakki petti gatti ga navvatam, aa magarayudi nadaka, aa sweet smile of recognition towards him anni thanani flash back lo ki theesukuni vellayi.
Abhijit ni eppudu intlo ekkada unna vethukovvali antha silent.thanaki ooha telisinnapati ninche anthe.ekkuva matladaniki ishta padadu.edhayina avasaram unte like akali , nidra adagatanaiki kuda ishta padadu.
abhijit vaallu regular ga valla ammamamma intiki velthundevallu .abhijit ki pakkane unde park ki vellatam ante ishtam.endukante thanaki akkada unde chetlu needa and mukhyam ga manushula ki koncham dooram ga undagalagatam.aa roju vaalla pinni pillalatho kalisi velli mellaga koncham dooram ga velli thanatho thechukunna oka book open chesadu.adhi anthaku mundu week ee vaalla naana thanaki 9 years complete ayina birth day gift ga ichina swamy vivekananda book.adhi theesi chaala interesting ga chadhive time ki ,gattiga oka navvu vinapadindhi.\
mamooluga ayithe thanaki assalu ishtam le antha sounds asalu kaani enduko aa navvu baaga nachindhi.evara navvindhi ani thala ethi choosthe oka ammai thana age ee anukunta ,thanane choosi navvuthondhi. em ayyindhi ani adugudham anukunna enduko thanani ala choodalanipinchindhe kaani adagali anipichale.
inthalo vaalla thammudu vachi ee ammai ni thiduthunnadu em mental aa enduku ala navvuthunnau maa anna ni choosi ani .eeme navvatam aapi ,already peddaga unna kallani inka peddavi chesi avunu naaku mental,ippudu ninnu karustha ani venta padindhi , andarni bhayapette valla thammudu debbaki bhayapadi parigedthunte ee abbai navvesaadu gattiga , anukokunda.aa ammai venakki thirigi choosi neeku dimple padthaya navvithe andhi,thanaki nijam ga em anaalo ardham kaale endukante indaka navve anukunnadu ippudu maata kuda bhale anipinchindhi.emo ani bhujalu egaresadu.aa ammai kallu chinnavi chesi , matladatam raadha ani adigindhi. ee lopu evaru osey gayyali raave ,vachentha varaku peekkuthintau,vachaaka aadukokunda em chesthunnau ani pilichesariki ,ee ammai parigettukuntu vellipothu byeeeeeee ani aruchu kuntu vellipoyindhi.
evaro abhijit ni shoulder meedha kotti oery abhiga ikkada unnau enti ani pilichesariki present lo ki vachi evada ani choosthe thana chinnapati friend ,prasad.arey ela unnau ra ani adigaadu abhijit.naakentra baane unnanu ,finally vere desham pothunna udhyogam meedha,nee sangathenti annadu.mellaga pakkana luggage choopinchi ,nenu anthe ante kompa theesi same flight kaadhu kada ani anukuni, choosukunte same flight, chanchanura babu ani manasulo anukuntaadu mana hero,ee lopu prasad full exciting ga arey nenu front desk daggara mana seats pakkane adugutha aagu anukuntu velthaadu .
ee lopu phone mogithe evara ani choosthe anjali.ventane lift chesi cheppu antaadu mana hero.anjali cheppu ledhu bootu ledhu ayyindha security check ani aduguthundhi ee lopu mana prasad abhijit dagaraki vachi aunty aa aagu hello cheptha ani emi cheppaboye lopu phone laakkuni hi aunty anesariki anajali thadabadi hello antundhi ,ventane prasad ki matter ardham ayyi, ohhh sorry sister ,ani abhijit ki ichesthadu phone.abhijit ventane phone theesukuni nuvvem maarale vedhava nuvvu nee thondhara ani malli chestha anjali ani pettesthaadu phone.
prasad inka aagaleka entra girlfriend aa ? eppatninchi ?ante aa ammai ni marchioyava ?ponle neeke manchidhi ani anni athane vaaguthunte endukule veedni aapatam naakem nashtam veedem anukunte anukuni oka verri navvu navvi neeku thochinattu anukora ,naaku gap kuda ivvakunda anni nuvve cheppukuntunnau ga ani antaadu abhijit.adhe athanu chesina thappu.
Iddaru edho matladukuntu mellaga checkin chesi ,gate daggara kurchunnaka malli abhijit phone mogindhi ,ee sari prasad navvina navvuki abhijit thala kottukuntu amma ra amma ani prasad ke phone ichaadu.prasad phone lift chesi aunty ela unnaru ante ,abhijit amma ventane gurthu patti ,emma prasad ela unnau veedekkada thagiladu neeku andhi .ventane prasad gatti ga navvi aunty meerem maarale ,ani airport lo thappipoyi pichi choopulu choosthunte nene pattukunna ani antunte abhijit phone laakkuni malla chestha gate daggare unnanu,malli inkoka 24 hours varaku cheyyanu ani tapp ani pettesthaadu..
luggage antha car lo sadhi suryakantham ,valla naanna car ekkabothunte ,nanna nenu drive chesthaa ani aduguthundhi, mana heroine.neeku unna kopaaniki enduku le amma driving adhi ee roads meedha antadu vaalla nanna.oorko naana meekante naakem kopam ledhu, ani tak mani keys theesukuni driving seat lo kurchuntundhi.ee lopu vaalla naana phone mogithe valla amma ani choosi ventane suryakantham phone laakkuni ,osey indaake digaame nuvvu nee enquiry lu airport daaka vachina danni intiki raana pettey phone ani call cut chesthundhi.vaalla naana enduku thalli cut chesau malla nuvvu driving ante mana iddarni vaayisthundhana antaaru navvuthu.anduke naana i love you,intha intelligent ayyundi amma ni ela pelli chesukunnaru ani navvesi car start chetshundhi.
suryakantham valla naana time baundho leka mana heroine ki driving meedha concentration perigindho kaani emi peddaga godava lekundane intiki vachaaru.valla amma ready ayipoyindhi harathi pallem tho.suryakanthaniki ollu mandipoyindhi em sadhincha ani eevida ee hadavidi ani , malli sarle evari prema vaalladhi ani oorukundhi vasthoone godava deniki asalke veellu manchi mood lo undatam important thanaki ani.
intloki vellaka suryakantham fresh ayyi inka thana favorite sofa lo kurchoni thanu inka valla naana happy ga amma chesinci vedi vedi dosalu thintu evo kaburlu cheppukuntunnaru.ee lopala vaalla ammamma call chesindhi ,surykantham ventane lift chesi aa ammamma vachesa intiki.nuvveppudu vasthau andi.nenu raavatam kaadhe neeku oka sambandham thechaanu antundhi …musaldhi modalu pettindhi nasa anukuni eeh po ammamma champaku appude ani petteyabothunte,idhigo photo inka details message chesthunna mee amma ki ani pettesthundhi valla ammamma.
Vaalla amma vachi suryakantham pakkana kurchundhi .mella ga suryakantham aavida ollo thala pettukuni ,entamma ee pelli gola asalu happy ga sanyasam lo join avutha anangane ,aavida okka mottikaaya motti,nor muyyi mushti matalu nuvvu, ippatikippudu evadu ready ga leru ninnu pelli chesukotaaniki kaani thinnau ga paduko inka mellaga ee vishayalanni matladukundham ani ,malli kottina choote mellaga raasthundhi.Thanaki theliayakundaane nidralo ki vellipothundhi suryakantham.
Flight land ayyi avvagane sudden ga nidra lo ninchi melakuva vachi chuttu okkasaari choosukunnadu Abhijit.malli ekkada unnado gurthochi kallu mooskunnadu navvuthunna suryakantham kalla mundhu kanipinchesariki thanu theliyakundane thana pedala meedha navvu vachindhi. Malli reality lo ki vachi , cha cha enti ila weak avuthunna okkasaari thana navvu choosthene anukuni thala vidhilichi, mellaga kallu therichi choosesariki Prasad pallikilisthu hi cheppadu.veedokadu anukuni, china navvu navvi ,full ga lechi kaastha fresh ayyesariki land ayyi bayata paddaru,iddaru.
Bayataki vachaaka thanu mamooluga hotel ki vellabothunte Prasad thitti,orey nenu room adhi set chesukunnara naa colleague help tho, atu veldham ra ani balavantham ga laakkelladu .abhijit ki ishtam lekapoyina sare ala aduguthunte kadhanaleka velladu.velli koncham set ayyi Anjali ki 1st message chesaadu ila reached safely and staying in friends room ani.Anjali ventane reply ichhindhi call me when possible ani.Anjali tho ventane matladali anipinchina malla Prasad gaadi questions face chese opika leka mellaga suryakantham navvu kalla mundhu kanapadthunte mellaga nidra lo ki jaarukunnadu.
Amma edho gusa gusa ga matladatam vinipinchi melakuva vachina suryakantham ,mellaga em matladuthundha ani vinataniki try chesindhi kallu theravakunda.aavida vaalla amma tho thana pelli koduku pics gurinchi discuss chesthundhani ardham ayyaka anukokunda thanaki airport lo choosina Abhijit gurthochaadu.Tall dark and handsome with cute dimples yet so serious face . adhentadhi thanu gurthu raavatam enti adhi pelli topic lo anukuni, mellaga lechi kurchuntundhi,inka vaalla amma n ammamma aa topic aaputhaaru annattu ga.
Valla amma mella ga tea theesukuni vachi kurchuni valla naana ki saiga chesthundhi matladamani annatto ga.vaalla naana aagu annatto saiga chesaaru.ee lopu suryakantham ,ento cheppandi mee saigala badhulu anesariki vaalla naana emi ledhu thalli,oka sambandham vachindhi and he want to meet you but entha thondharaga kudirithe anthe better antunnadu.aa abbai profile naaku n amma ki nachindhi.nuvvu kuda choodu nachithe ,repu ellundi lo kalavachu antaaru, valla nana matladaru kabatti motham finish cheyanichindi suryakantham lekapoyunte ee paatiki kallu thaagina kothila dancelu vesundedhi .
Ippudu argue cheyyala or oppukovala ani alochisthunte maatiki Abhijit gurthosthunnadu .ellehe enti ee abbai ila antukunnadu.appudeppudo edho konni days ee kada adhi kaka aa pogaru inka thaggale kaneesam palakarinchabothe kuda respond avvani vaadni thalchukuni ila disturb avvatam enti sodhi laga anukuni, sare lets give it a try ani .mee ishtam nana ,mari cheera kattukuni andariki coffees ivvamani or vachina vallu atu nadu itu navvu anakapothe chaalu ani akkada ninchi lechi vachesindhi,unte ekkada vedhava comments chesthaano anukuni.
Paiki terrace meedhaki vellindhi.vaalla amma manchi garden maintain chesthundhi paina. Aa chetla Madhya pilla gaalulu veesthunte ala mellaga flash back loki velthundhi.
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2022.01.01 21:13 Srilalitha Story part 2. Part 1 link in comments

TLDR: struggle of hero n heroine to escape marraige for their own issues .
Note : if the post is too long ( which i feel ) i am planning to post a Google doc link or blog link.please let me know if that's fine (mods especially).let me know if this lenghr is readable ( mari peddaga undha or ee mathram ok na so that i can post accordingly.let the criticisms begin.w
valla amma tho matladaka brain motham off ayyindhi ani inkoka call chesadu.ring ayina ventane lift chesi oka ammai hello cheppu abbulu em annaru maa atha andi,ventane abhijit ehe aavida vaayimpe ante malla nee gola enti aaputhaava anesariki, aa ammai ayyo abbulu ala em le joke chesa ,cheppava aunty ki us gurinchi ante yeah ,inkem undhi pelli pelli ani start chesindhi annadu. sare adhi manaki telisindhe ga, sare office ayyaka vacheyyi , naa room ki ,prashantham ga matladukundham ani cheppu pettesindhi aa ammai,anjali.
call cut chesi Anjali alochanalo padindhi.veellu kalisi daggara daggara 5 years ayyindhi and relationship anukuni kuda 3 years daatindhi kaani abhi eppudu pelli topic vachina ,just gets irritated.entha hurt ayina vallayina they will heal n recover but endhuko abhi ee vishayam lo asaalu maaratle.thanu sarle modatlone em balavantha pedadham anukundhi kaani ponu ponu bhayam vesthundhi endukante thanaki abhi ante pranam ala ani society ki eduru fight cheyyaledhu .
ippitiki thanaki gurthe vaallu modati saari kalisinappudu abhi ki ippati abhi ki entha maarpo aa dhairyam tho ne thaninka wait chesthondhi.anjaliki modati saari choosinappude nachesadu abhijit.enduko thanki theliyadhu kaani abhijit ni odhala budhi kaale anduke modatlo thanu pattinchukokapoyina ,vinipinchukokapoyina chaala jagrathaga abhijit chuttu thana prapanchanni set chesukundhi.
office ayyaka urgent ga velli anjali ni kalisaadu abhijit.velli vellatame gattiga hug chesukuni anjali ni ,naaku ekkadaki vellalani ledhu evarni pelli chesukovalani ledhu,happy ga manam iddaram ekkadikaina velli prashantham ga live in undham antaadu .Ventane anjali mellaga aa hug ninchi vidipoyi ,enduku babu pellante neeku antha kangaru ,inni years ninchi choosthunnau inka naa meedha nammakam raledha ante,anjali please naaku pelli ante nammakam ledu ani telise kada manam ee relationship start chesaam malli entidhi ani visugga balcony lo ki velthaadu abhijit.Anjali navvukuni iddariki tea theesukuni velli oka cup thanaki ichi ,sare sare nee 1st love gurinchi telusu le kaani inka odhilesi ,lets discuss something else ani mellaga abhijit mood maarusthundhi.
mellaga Abhijit velle roju raane vasthundhi .Airport ki evvarni raavodhu ani cheppi friend ni drop cheyyamani airport lo digi luggage theesukuni nadavatam start chesthuu sudden ga aagipothaadu ,endukante eduru ga suryakantham valla naanatho edho joke vesukuntu edurupaduthundhi.
Suryakantham abhijit ni choodagaane , 1st ekkado choosane anukuni next gurthupatti palakarinche lopu ,abhijit koncham fast ga naduchukuntu mundhuki vellipothaadu.Are enti ithanu eppudu naatho matladadu em pogaro anukuni odhilesi,valla anna evara abbai ani adigithe naa school mate nana ,chaala amnchi abbai kaani enduko eppudu naatho matladadu ani vallu mundhu ki vellipotharu.
abhijit ki inka aa brain block poledhu.asalu nijam ga suryakanthanne na choosindhi ani doubt vachi malli malli venakki choosaadu.Aa thala venakki petti gatti ga navvatam, aa magarayudi nadaka, aa sweet smile of recognition towards him anni thanani flash back lo ki theesukuni vellayi.
Abhijit ni eppudu intlo ekkada unna vethukovvali antha silent.thanaki ooha telisinnapati ninche anthe.ekkuva matladaniki ishta padadu.edhayina avasaram unte like akali , nidra adagatanaiki kuda ishta padadu.
abhijit vaallu regular ga valla ammamamma intiki velthundevallu .abhijit ki pakkane unde park ki vellatam ante ishtam.endukante thanaki akkada unde chetlu needa and mukhyam ga manushula ki koncham dooram ga undagalagatam.aa roju vaalla pinni pillalatho kalisi velli mellaga koncham dooram ga velli thanatho thechukunna oka book open chesadu.adhi anthaku mundu week ee vaalla naana thanaki 9 years complete ayina birth day gift ga ichina swamy vivekananda book.adhi theesi chaala interesting ga chadhive time ki ,gattiga oka navvu vinapadindhi.\
mamooluga ayithe thanaki assalu ishtam le antha sounds asalu kaani enduko aa navvu baaga nachindhi.evara navvindhi ani thala ethi choosthe oka ammai thana age ee anukunta ,thanane choosi navvuthondhi. em ayyindhi ani adugudham anukunna enduko thanani ala choodalanipinchindhe kaani adagali anipichale.
inthalo vaalla thammudu vachi ee ammai ni thiduthunnadu em mental aa enduku ala navvuthunnau maa anna ni choosi ani .eeme navvatam aapi ,already peddaga unna kallani inka peddavi chesi avunu naaku mental,ippudu ninnu karustha ani venta padindhi , andarni bhayapette valla thammudu debbaki bhayapadi parigedthunte ee abbai navvesaadu gattiga , anukokunda.aa ammai venakki thirigi choosi neeku dimple padthaya navvithe andhi,thanaki nijam ga em anaalo ardham kaale endukante indaka navve anukunnadu ippudu maata kuda bhale anipinchindhi.emo ani bhujalu egaresadu.aa ammai kallu chinnavi chesi , matladatam raadha ani adigindhi. ee lopu evaru osey gayyali raave ,vachentha varaku peekkuthintau,vachaaka aadukokunda em chesthunnau ani pilichesariki ,ee ammai parigettukuntu vellipothu byeeeeeee ani aruchu kuntu vellipoyindhi.
evaro abhijit ni shoulder meedha kotti oery abhiga ikkada unnau enti ani pilichesariki present lo ki vachi evada ani choosthe thana chinnapati friend ,prasad.arey ela unnau ra ani adigaadu abhijit.naakentra baane unnanu ,finally vere desham pothunna udhyogam meedha,nee sangathenti annadu.mellaga pakkana luggage choopinchi ,nenu anthe ante kompa theesi same flight kaadhu kada ani anukuni, choosukunte same flight, chanchanura babu ani manasulo anukuntaadu mana hero,ee lopu prasad full exciting ga arey nenu front desk daggara mana seats pakkane adugutha aagu anukuntu velthaadu .
ee lopu phone mogithe evara ani choosthe anjali.ventane lift chesi cheppu antaadu mana hero.anjali cheppu ledhu bootu ledhu ayyindha security check ani aduguthundhi ee lopu mana prasad abhijit dagaraki vachi aunty aa aagu hello cheptha ani emi cheppaboye lopu phone laakkuni hi aunty anesariki anajali thadabadi hello antundhi ,ventane prasad ki matter ardham ayyi, ohhh sorry sister ,ani abhijit ki ichesthadu phone.abhijit ventane phone theesukuni nuvvem maarale vedhava nuvvu nee thondhara ani malli chestha anjali ani pettesthaadu phone.
prasad inka aagaleka entra girlfriend aa ? eppatninchi ?ante aa ammai ni marchioyava ?ponle neeke manchidhi ani anni athane vaaguthunte endukule veedni aapatam naakem nashtam veedem anukunte anukuni oka verri navvu navvi neeku thochinattu anukora ,naaku gap kuda ivvakunda anni nuvve cheppukuntunnau ga ani antaadu abhijit.adhe athanu chesina thappu.
Iddaru edho matladukuntu mellaga checkin chesi ,gate daggara kurchunnaka malli abhijit phone mogindhi ,ee sari prasad navvina navvuki abhijit thala kottukuntu amma ra amma ani prasad ke phone ichaadu.prasad phone lift chesi aunty ela unnaru ante ,abhijit amma ventane gurthu patti ,emma prasad ela unnau veedekkada thagiladu neeku andhi .ventane prasad gatti ga navvi aunty meerem maarale ,ani airport lo thappipoyi pichi choopulu choosthunte nene pattukunna ani antunte abhijit phone laakkuni malla chestha gate daggare unnanu,malli inkoka 24 hours varaku cheyyanu ani tapp ani pettesthaadu..
luggage antha car lo sadhi suryakantham ,valla naanna car ekkabothunte ,nanna nenu drive chesthaa ani aduguthundhi, mana heroine.neeku unna kopaaniki enduku le amma driving adhi ee roads meedha antadu vaalla nanna.oorko naana meekante naakem kopam ledhu, ani tak mani keys theesukuni driving seat lo kurchuntundhi.ee lopu vaalla naana phone mogithe valla amma ani choosi ventane suryakantham phone laakkuni ,osey indaake digaame nuvvu nee enquiry lu airport daaka vachina danni intiki raana pettey phone ani call cut chesthundhi.vaalla naana enduku thalli cut chesau malla nuvvu driving ante mana iddarni vaayisthundhana antaaru navvuthu.anduke naana i love you,intha intelligent ayyundi amma ni ela pelli chesukunnaru ani navvesi car start chetshundhi.
suryakantham valla naana time baundho leka mana heroine ki driving meedha concentration perigindho kaani emi peddaga godava lekundane intiki vachaaru.valla amma ready ayipoyindhi harathi pallem tho.suryakanthaniki ollu mandipoyindhi em sadhincha ani eevida ee hadavidi ani , malli sarle evari prema vaalladhi ani oorukundhi vasthoone godava deniki asalke veellu manchi mood lo undatam important thanaki ani.
intloki vellaka suryakantham fresh ayyi inka thana favorite sofa lo kurchoni thanu inka valla naana happy ga amma chesinci vedi vedi dosalu thintu evo kaburlu cheppukuntunnaru.ee lopala vaalla ammamma call chesindhi ,surykantham ventane lift chesi aa ammamma vachesa intiki.nuvveppudu vasthau andi.nenu raavatam kaadhe neeku oka sambandham thechaanu antundhi …musaldhi modalu pettindhi nasa anukuni eeh po ammamma champaku appude ani petteyabothunte,idhigo photo inka details message chesthunna mee amma ki ani pettesthundhi valla ammamma.
Vaalla amma vachi suryakantham pakkana kurchundhi .mella ga suryakantham aavida ollo thala pettukuni ,entamma ee pelli gola asalu happy ga sanyasam lo join avutha anangane ,aavida okka mottikaaya motti,nor muyyi mushti matalu nuvvu, ippatikippudu evadu ready ga leru ninnu pelli chesukotaaniki kaani thinnau ga paduko inka mellaga ee vishayalanni matladukundham ani ,malli kottina choote mellaga raasthundhi.Thanaki theliayakundaane nidralo ki vellipothundhi suryakantham.
Flight land ayyi avvagane sudden ga nidra lo ninchi melakuva vachi chuttu okkasaari choosukunnadu Abhijit.malli ekkada unnado gurthochi kallu mooskunnadu navvuthunna suryakantham kalla mundhu kanipinchesariki thanu theliyakundane thana pedala meedha navvu vachindhi. Malli reality lo ki vachi , cha cha enti ila weak avuthunna okkasaari thana navvu choosthene anukuni thala vidhilichi, mellaga kallu therichi choosesariki Prasad pallikilisthu hi cheppadu.veedokadu anukuni, china navvu navvi ,full ga lechi kaastha fresh ayyesariki land ayyi bayata paddaru,iddaru.
Bayataki vachaaka thanu mamooluga hotel ki vellabothunte Prasad thitti,orey nenu room adhi set chesukunnara naa colleague help tho, atu veldham ra ani balavantham ga laakkelladu .abhijit ki ishtam lekapoyina sare ala aduguthunte kadhanaleka velladu.velli koncham set ayyi Anjali ki 1st message chesaadu ila reached safely and staying in friends room ani.Anjali ventane reply ichhindhi call me when possible ani.Anjali tho ventane matladali anipinchina malla Prasad gaadi questions face chese opika leka mellaga suryakantham navvu kalla mundhu kanapadthunte mellaga nidra lo ki jaarukunnadu.
Amma edho gusa gusa ga matladatam vinipinchi melakuva vachina suryakantham ,mellaga em matladuthundha ani vinataniki try chesindhi kallu theravakunda.aavida vaalla amma tho thana pelli koduku pics gurinchi discuss chesthundhani ardham ayyaka anukokunda thanaki airport lo choosina Abhijit gurthochaadu.Tall dark and handsome with cute dimples yet so serious face . adhentadhi thanu gurthu raavatam enti adhi pelli topic lo anukuni, mellaga lechi kurchuntundhi,inka vaalla amma n ammamma aa topic aaputhaaru annattu ga.
Valla amma mella ga tea theesukuni vachi kurchuni valla naana ki saiga chesthundhi matladamani annatto ga.vaalla naana aagu annatto saiga chesaaru.ee lopu suryakantham ,ento cheppandi mee saigala badhulu anesariki vaalla naana emi ledhu thalli,oka sambandham vachindhi and he want to meet you but entha thondharaga kudirithe anthe better antunnadu.aa abbai profile naaku n amma ki nachindhi.nuvvu kuda choodu nachithe ,repu ellundi lo kalavachu antaaru, valla nana matladaru kabatti motham finish cheyanichindi suryakantham lekapoyunte ee paatiki kallu thaagina kothila dancelu vesundedhi .
Ippudu argue cheyyala or oppukovala ani alochisthunte maatiki Abhijit gurthosthunnadu .ellehe enti ee abbai ila antukunnadu.appudeppudo edho konni days ee kada adhi kaka aa pogaru inka thaggale kaneesam palakarinchabothe kuda respond avvani vaadni thalchukuni ila disturb avvatam enti sodhi laga anukuni, sare lets give it a try ani .mee ishtam nana ,mari cheera kattukuni andariki coffees ivvamani or vachina vallu atu nadu itu navvu anakapothe chaalu ani akkada ninchi lechi vachesindhi,unte ekkada vedhava comments chesthaano anukuni.
Paiki terrace meedhaki vellindhi.vaalla amma manchi garden maintain chesthundhi paina. Aa chetla Madhya pilla gaalulu veesthunte ala mellaga flash back loki velthundhi.
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