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Alexis Writes Smut

2017.10.02 17:04 AlexisEllison Alexis Writes Smut

Just a place for me to share my dirty stories.
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2021.01.05 01:47 next_century_romeo DreamJob_OfficeSexStory

I have BollywoodStories subreddit for my stories, but my Dream Job story is special to me and I want to share a lot of stuff around it in a non-cluttered way. This community will be only dedicated to my story The Dream Job which is based around an office where a dominant boss is surrounded by stunningly beautiful women. You can guess what happens but you don't know why. My Literotica username is nextcenturyromeo so if you have read first parts of this story there...
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2018.02.19 13:19 Tristan's Tale

This subreddit for Tristan's Tale, by IPD, is currently closed as there has not been any chapter updates for a long time. This subreddit shall reopen if a new chapter is released, whereby discussion about the new chapter can take place.
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2024.05.03 18:47 _Volkar17 WHAT S YOU’RE FAVOURITE BETHOVKEN SMYPOHNY

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2024.04.08 08:15 Crytu Reccs

Hey all, just read a really well written story on literotica and would love more recommendations, can be on any if the free platforms. Thanks!
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2024.04.07 19:40 LitLits For Authors Considering Moving to Literotica

In the last few days, Literotica has received a number of messages from Wattpad authors asking about moving their works to Literotica. This appears to be a result of recent changes at Wattpad. This post will try to answer some of the most common questions authors affected by the changes might have.
Where AO3 specializes in fan fiction, Literotica has been publishing mostly original fiction works (much of it adult/erotic) for 25+ years. Over a million readers and authors visit our online community every day.
Literotica welcomes all new authors, no matter where you come from, but while we're fans of AO3's absolutist free speech policies, we have publishing guidelines that are somewhat more strict than AO3. Literotica requires that all story characters involved in sexual situations be at least 18 years old. That means that we likely cannot publish stories being removed from Wattpad for age-related issues. If your story is being removed just for including adult/erotic content, there's a good chance that it would be welcome at Literotica.
The Literotica publishing guidelines are covered in detail in the Literotica FAQ.
Literotica readers find stories through a combination of Categories and Tags. Unlike AO3, Literotica limits the number of Tags that you can add to a story - so it's important that authors select high-quality relevant tags to help readers find your work. Literotica readers often bookmark tags and also monitor the New Stories page to discover new works and new authors. There have been many articles written over the years on how to properly format and tag works for maximum exposure on Literotica.
If you need help with the Literotica publishing process or policies, the FAQ and Author Community Support Forum should provide most of the answers you'll need to decide whether Literotica is the right place for your stories.
We're sad to see the recent wave of censorship and hope that all affected authors will find a place where they can feel at home - whether that's AO3, Lit, or another site.
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2024.04.07 09:21 theycallmeprincesss Need help validating an idea

It's a stupid idea but I wish to start an adult blog. I'd just be posting sex stories (real and fiction) like Literotica.
But my question really is. How easy it is to setup a blog like that. Do domain providers allow it? Do hosting providers allow it?
There would be no media material. Just text. Maybe, just maybe photos in the future if it truly takes off but none in the beginning.
Is there a way to be anonymous? Like I don't want creeps to track me or my location. I am not a techie and I literally just learned these terms like domain and hosting providers. I have a rough idea of how this all works but just looking for genuine suggestions.
If someone can point out any negatives or issues which might occur then would be great.
Thanks cheers
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2024.04.02 09:25 boop_du_bop_bop Looking for a few specific literotica stories

Not sure if this is the right place for this but here goes: a few years ago there was a post recommending a few literotica stories to actuallesbians. It’s since been removed and I can’t remember the names of them for the life of me. There first was one about a struggling theatre and how an actress and the owner of the theatre fell in love. Lots of plot and dead parent drama. They have a date in an aquarium. The other story was about 2 FWB. One of them catches feelings and chaos ensures. It was a big plot point that the one who didn’t catch feelings was super nihilistic about marriage and monogamy. Long shot, but worth asking.
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2024.03.28 19:25 ThrowRA219219 My 'M 34' boyfriend is watching gay porn, is he gay? I'm 'F 30'

I have been with my boyfriend for 8 months. I'm 30 and he is 34 years old, and a couple days ago l found that he have been watching a lot of porn, it was literally a lot! But the thing here is that the content was gay/ trans/ cross dressing. He also reads stories about it. ( literotica) I decided to ask him about it, he said he likes anal which he never suggested to do it with me. He said he is not gay/bi but then why he is ONLY watching gay content? He said he used to be single for 5 years and that took him to watch porn. When we had sex he was always hard, but he couldn't finish having sex with me, it was always by hand or me doing oral. Sometimes I remember I told you " you don't desire me" because some weekends we even didn't have sex. ( we don't live together but we always meet on the weekends ). Ijust don't know what to think about this. He also said that he accepts that he has addictive personality and he offered me to get therapy together, but I feel after this I won't feel the same. I searched some of the videos and it's just men having sex with men. The website is Xhamster
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2024.03.23 08:49 onetimeonly02948027 is text porn (like an ai chatbot) allowed during MO?

I'm talking like ch.ai or stuff on literotica, it is definitely sexual but its nothing the mind can't do, I use it mostly just if I cant think of a story myself. just wondering
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2024.03.20 11:24 dirtywifeannu LOSING VIRGINITY TO MOMMY

Greetings! Everyone. Find out the latest story where son couldn't resist watching her mom naked and fucked her later finds out, the mother already knows.
If you like this short story, make sure to like and comment.
https://literotica.com/s/losing-virginity-to-mommy
And if you are looking for incest/BDSM stories with pictures, you may visit https://dirtywifeannu.blogspot.com/
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2024.03.06 18:45 ZzEoO Piano teacher/adult student and mistakes corrected with a ruler…

Ok this is a very specific (and yet another slightly deranged) request.
I’d love a story with a piano teacher + student dynamic where the teacher corrects the student’s mistakes with ruler slaps. Sexy ruler slaps. Or some other kinky way to teach.
I read a story like this on literotica once and it’s lived rent free in my head ever since. The teacher comes to the student’s house to teach her, and he says that when he learned, he got ruler smacks to correct his mistakes. She gets turned on by this, and puts a ruler out on top of the piano next time he comes over. So he starts to use it on her wrists when she makes mistakes in her lessons, and that eventually evolves into some very hot spanking and sexual situations, some related to piano teaching and some not. Phewwww 😅
(ETA: here’s the literotica story 😉 https://www.literotica.com/s/lessons-from-my-piano-teacher)
The spicier the better, preferably a 4 or a 5, but I think you probably inferred that already. Stories that are more lighthearted are preferred (but am also fine with darker stories).
Anyone got anything? Thanks! And thank you Reddit, for making anonymous accounts possible 😆
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2024.03.02 11:02 Anna__V PSA: Don't write on Wattpad.

Now that I have your attention, I don't mean "don't publish." I mean, don't write.
There are so many posts week after week where people have lost their work or at least access to their work for various reasons, because they use Wattpad as a platform to write. Don't do that.
Here are a coupe of hints:
Next: Organization. At least those of us on the spectrum and/or having ADHD, our WIPs greatly outnumber finished stories (don't lie, I know.)
What has helped my from sprawling across platforms and multiple folders and locations and everything has been this:
This way all WIPs are either long enough (three chapters) that I consider them stories in their own worth, or then they are just in two places, either as ideas, or as short stories. No more looking in dozens of different folders under bazillion different apps, that where have I saved THAT story?
When you deem story good enough for publishing. here are few pointers:
If you have a successful story, you WILL be contacted by these websites that say they want your story and you will get paid. No you won't. Do your research, but in general just block and ignore. 99.99% of these are scams that will just steal your stories and add them to iOS apps and you won't get paid.
Wattpad and Inkitt have sponsored stories that do pay you, but it's super hard to get in. (which is how you know it's not scam.) Inkitt has some paid tier for authors, but it's not required, and I have no idea what it does aside from more visibility that they say on the emails. I've never paid for it, and haven't seen any decline in readers.
Neither Wattpad nor Inkitt have basically any sort of community (anymore), so promoting your books on the platforms itself is hard. It requires constant work and you walk a (very) fine line of informing readers, and being annoying with announcements. You're better of marketing your story elsewhere, like here, on Reddit. (or Tumblr, FB, whatever you want.)
If you have any questions, feel free to ask, I'm more than willing to answer.
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2024.02.26 02:29 rockmanfa https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6305459&page=submissions

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2024.02.18 22:23 Reasonable_Injury121 Chilvary Is On Life Support, Chapter Seven

About nine months after we moved in to our new house, I was awarded tenure. Brooke and I celebrated with dinner at a nice Italian restaurant in the next town over. The extra money that came with my promotion, while not substantial, was certainly welcome. We hired a general contractor to begin renovating the downstairs guest bedroom and bathroom as well finish our basement by creating an office or second guest bedroom, a small workout room and a half bath.
Meanwhile, Brooke had gotten into the habit of going out with her friend Michelle on Saturday nights. At first, I thought nothing of it – two good friends having a girl’s night out. Michelle was Brooke‘s age. They had known each other since grade school, growing up together in a town about 30 miles away from the one in which Brooke and I now lived. But whereas Brooke went to the college nearest to where she grew up – namely, the liberal arts institution where I taught – Michelle had attended Ohio State in Columbus, where she majored in business. After graduation, Michelle moved back to her hometown, where she now works in marketing for a midsized manufacturing company. In my humble opinion, Michelle is not the stunner that Brooke is, but she’s certainly well above average in the looks department. She is about an inch shorter than Brooke at 5’ 6”, with long blonde hair, sultry eyes and slightly larger breasts than Brooke (whose breasts are perfect, to my eyes, along with every other part of her).
I didn’t know what Brooke had shared with Michelle (who, I’m sure, like everyone else, must have wondered how someone so beautiful could end up with an older, dweeby guy like me) about the nature of our relationship, but she did not openly exhibit her dominance when Michelle came over to visit, at least not in the pre Luke days. Don’t get me wrong, I would cook and serve dinner for the three of us, get them both drinks, make popcorn when we watched a movie together, etc. Once Brooke put her feet up in my lap as the three of us sat on our sectional sofa, watching a thriller, and asked me to massage them. I thought I saw the two of them exchange subtle smirks. But that was about the extent of it. Michelle would make seemingly off-hand comments like, “Wow, you really have him trained well, don’t you?” And when we had a little cocktail party to celebrate my promotion, with Michelle and Neil Lawson as guests, Michelle gave me an apron as a gift. Everyone laughed (I’m sure I blushed).
Usually when they went out on Saturday evenings, Brooke and Michelle wore jeans and T-shirts, or similar casual attire. However, one Saturday about two weeks after the cocktail party, I was reading in the living room while Brooke was upstairs getting ready for her night out. Michelle was coming over to pick her up as usual. When Michelle rang the doorbell, Brooke hurried downstairs. She was wearing a short black dress that hugged her body, really accentuating her curves, with sheer black stockings and ankle boots. Michelle was similarly dressed to kill. As I regarded her with a stunned expression, Brooke said to me as they left the house, simply, “Don’t wait up for me, tonight, Walter. I may be late.”
“Very late,“ added Michelle. The two of them giggled.
The way Brooke was dressed, I couldn’t imagine men being able to keep their hands off her. I was sad and anxious all evening, but tried to distract myself by working on my book. The feelings of jealousy I was experiencing fit in perfectly with the subject of my book: how the rich history of male masochism in Western literature likely originated with the poetry and conventions of medieval courtly love. This book was to be part literary criticism, part history and part psychology, as I intended to trace the lasting influence that medieval literature’s depictions of male masochism in courtly love have had not only in fiction but in real life relationships. Such as my and Brooke’s relationship, for instance.
My study was to begin with an analysis of the earliest texts describing this type of relationship, Chretien de Troyes’ Knight of the Cart (Le Chevalier de La Charrete) in the 12th century and Chaucer’s Troilus and Criseyde in the 13th century. The Knight of the Cart tells the story of Lancelot and Guinevere, including the public displays of humiliation that he subjected himself to as her servant. Most notably, Lancelot had to ride in a cart to rescue Guinevere, who was being held prisoner. In Arthurian England, it was considered deeply dishonorable and shameful, indeed emasculating, for a knight to ride in a cart, a conveyance used by peasants and prisoners. Lancelot was willing to endure this permanent emasculation, never to be seen the same way again by his friends and rivals, to save his lady; nevertheless, Guinevere punishes him when she learns that he hesitated momentarily when getting into the cart, refusing to even look at him. In other words, Lancelot willingly emasculates himself for Guinevere, yet she still punishes him for not being eager enough to emasculate himself for her. Even after she finally forgives him, she continues to cruelly exercise her power over him by ordering him to perform poorly at a jousting tournament. He obediently allows himself to be unhorsed to by his opponent to please her. Guinevere controls him as if he were her puppet, imposing upon him humiliation after humiliation.
Other scholars, of course, had written about the influence of medieval courtly love on the subsequent literature of sadomasochism – indeed showing a direct line between The Knight of the Cart and Leopold von Sacher-Masoch’s Venus in Furs. However, I intended to go much further, analyzing many other texts (and even plays and movies, eventually), over the centuries, up to and including the rich contemporary body of male masochistic fiction found on social media sites such as Reddit and on on-line fiction sites such as Literotica, Fictionmania and Nifty Archive that had become so prevalent in recent years.
It is important to note that courtly love relationships were essentially love triangles involving the submissive knight, the lady and the lady’s husband, a man of superior social status to the knight. They were really variations of another type of love triangle relationship featuring male masochism, namely the cuckolding relationship. The connection between these two types of love triangles began to take serious shape in my mind that evening as, while working on my book, I kept picturing Brooke in the arms and in the bed of other men — men stronger, better endowed, more successful, more worthy than I.
Shamefully, I found myself beginning to rub my cock through the panties I was wearing under my jeans, as I envisioned Brooke being taken by a superior man. Something I realized that could very well be happening that night even as I was imagining it.
My thoughts were exceedingly distressing. And yet intensely erotic.
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2024.02.18 18:14 Heathen129 Weekly Roundup 02/18/24

Weekly Roundup 02/18/24
Hey guys read 4 really good things this week and one sadly was the end of a series. So without further ado lets kick this pig
Realm Of Monsters

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No way on Gods Green Earth should this be free. This is a really really good story. You want a OP MC who fails and has to suffer consequences check. You want Love Interest who matter check. You want not every girl falling in love with the MC also check. You want political intrigue that makes sense and villains and heroes that are compelling and interesting double check. I can not recommend this story enough.
We meet the MC who may or may not be a goblin who may or may not be a scion of a house who may or may not be the foster child of a god. Everything is in flux and I actually loved every minute of it. People die people fuck up people fall in love people fall out of love. You see people gain friends lose friends things like duty and honor rip people apart and bring them together. It was fantastic and still ongoing.
You can read it here https://www.scribblehub.com/series/187579/realm-of-monsters/ for the low low cost of your time. It's well edited well written the dialogue is tight the characters are interesting with flaws and all. There is very little handwaving of mistakes. What it felt like is the author started with a world made the rules of the world and made her characters abide by those rules. This is not really for the readers who want one of those stories where the MC is great and the world exists to fellate him, nothing wrong with that I read E.V books too just this story is not it. It does so far conform to the rules of this sub as well...which is nice.

Goblin Apocalypse 3

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NNNNNOOOOOOO IT'S OVER!!! Seriously this is such a good story. The ending was well done and ended in really only the way it could have with some sort of decent resolution ( I guess they all get eaten or captured by the other town and the girls get turned into breeding stock could have been a ending too.)
I do feel that there is things to revisit should the author chose. Like there are still Goblins on the original planet. He should have told the people of Ashu and maybe some could have been saved. I mean he went back for Emmy. Maybe a story with the kids could be visiting the world of their mothers seeing if it can be reclaimed now that the empire is under new kinder management.
I wonder if the Apocalypse they are really talking about is the extinction of the Goblin race because the MC refuses to tell people full Goblins are still on the planet? That would make this series take a very dark turn. Either way this was a really good book ending a really enjoyable series.

Wings And Tails

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Please can I have some more. This was really good as well. You know that they author has a plan and not just writing by the seat of their pants. They know where they are taking you and they know how they are getting there. So far all the characters that have been introduced have mattered and not just been eye candy.
I love how the MC is unique in the world (Male with Minder Powers among other skills) but the world still does not bow down to his greatness and everyone inflate his ego. Heck Hope is a more skilled pilot and Madeline is a better minder. I also really enjoy how the author kept the people more animalistic not just humans with ears.
Speaking of Madeline I am a big big fan of Yandere girls and I hope the MC can get her sorted in a better trajectory. She is the definition of villains are not born they are made.
I guess two of my peeves were they made the only unattractive girl (the aero engineer who is a throw back of Gadget from Rescue Rangers) a aggressive lesbian. Like seriously there was no need to do that . The other being I was not a fan of how fast the relationships seemed to move. Madeline got to build some Hope made sense but Addision felt rushed. I really hope the author does not add anymore potential love interest (MC has a whole ass fighter wing of unique girls for the author to develop) so that way we as the reader can actually get to know the characters.
I do like how the author makes James really consider how not just the Nazis would screw things up in Crestia. When he starts thinking like
The images of what I had seen that day in Kampf’s mind ran through my memories again, causing me to shudder. I had not been in this world for long, but I had met some interesting people, and the thought of the Nazis turning this world into their home away from home disgusted me. I wondered how my government would have reacted if they had been the ones to find the gate to this world first, especially since it was right in our front yard. I wanted to believe we would have done better by the people of Dione, but I wasn't sure.
Lee, Isaac. Wings and Tails (p. 347). Kindle Edition.
I was just thinking that he should already know. Jim Crow was still a thing and look how the US was treating the Japanese in the US after Pearl. We all think we would be better then the monster until we have a chance to be the monster.
I think it would have gone pretty badly until Dione had it's own Loving VS Virginia moment. I think that would have happened quickly though. A abundance of women willing to share a man openly with a majority being super attractive.
I dont see any other books by this author but I am definitely keeping my eye out. Anyway a great start to what I hope shapes up into a great series. As long as the author can keep up quality. This made me reread the last book on my list.

Mud Blood & Magic

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Some stories lose their luster on a reread. Once you go back and really look at them some of the flaws you overlook become really glaring. It was like that for the series Endangered by LPTC (on literotica) for me. Luckily this book was not one of them.
I thoroughly enjoyed the offering. The military terms were correct. The MC had a actual MOS that made sense why his skills were what they were. The MC was NOT rando special forces bad ass that was trained by ninjas. I was a fan of the tactics and the actual human emotions that the MC shows.
I am also a fan of how the author was not in a rush. We get to learn who the players are in this story we get to learn about the world and what is at stake win or lose. We also get to see a Henpecked Odin so that was nice as well.
The one thing that did feel rushed was Veserick. She went from willing to blow her brains out to being cool with the MC in less then a week. It felt jarring unless her goddess did something more then just making her MC's servant. I know she says her family's motto is I have grieved, I have accepted, I have let go, but it still felt rushed.
Either way a excellent story that I am fearing wont be continued anytime soon (been almost two years). I don't see anything else written by the author on their amazon page and no emails from their mailing list. Some have said that they are busy writing a story that is in the same world but different people right now.
Anyway this is what I read this week. I am going to get to Villain for Hire 4 (waiting for the audio on the 21st...go snag it if you haven't already) Renegade Ravagers 3 (I was going to try to wait for the audio but screw it) and Succubus Summoner 2.

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2024.02.08 21:20 VeryFinePrint Books with a master/slave relationship that aren't dark romance nor BDSM

I'm looking for M/F books where one MC is the master and the other is the slave, but where the relationship doesn't head towards BDSM nor is the book dark romance.
For example, in {The Admiral's Acquisition by Luna Gold}, the FMC buys the MMC when she sees him being abused. The FMC doesn't know what to do with the MMC, and a good chunk of the book is her trying to figure out his place and their relationship.
Another example is Willing Slave, Unwilling Master by LifeonVil on Literotica. In that story the MMC is an abolitionist who is gifted a slave by his parents in an attempt to undermine him. He wants to get rid of her, but realizes that in doing so she would go to a terrible master, so he is stuck with her.
In both of these stories, the relationship sometimes feels less like slavery and more like a heavily asymetrical arranged marriage. The MCs are stuck with each other and society labels one "owner" and the other "slave", and they need to figure out how to navigate that.
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2024.02.06 21:55 tdpz1974 My life in procrastination

I am a software engineer. Most people don't know what that means, other than "good at computers". So if there is some hot new thing in computers, I'm expected to know all about it.
And, throughout the history of the Internet, there is always something that is suddenly making people famous.
Every time I want to join in. Start some kind of side hustle, keep working on it, and strike either fame or fortune. And find an outlet for all my non-work-related special interests.
1995: "I should build a web page". Did only a tiny university-internal one no one read. 1997: "I should build a web site". It was going to be about my special interest at the time, but never did. Though I did later build one, it was just a collection of my rants on mailing lists. 2001: "I should write a blog". I did start a few over the years, but never got past the first few posts, and no one ever read them. 2004: "I should become a regular contributor to Daily Kos". I wrote some diaries, but not enough to really make a mark. 2007: "I should become a regular contributor to Huffington Post" 2008: "I should write for Cracked" 2010: "I should start a podcast" 2011: "I should be tweeting regularly" 2012: "I should be leading a Facebook group" 2014: "I should start an erotic Tumblr" 2015: "I should post regularly on Medium". I did write a handful of articles, but basically met the same fate as the blogs. 2017: "I should make videos on YouTube" 2019: "I should write stories on Literotica". OK this one I really did, because I was not working at the time. But stopped when I went back to work. 2020: "I should make political memes on Instagram" 2021: "I should be writing stories on Substack" 2023: "I should make shorts on Tiktok"
A surprising amount of pressure comes from therapists, who after talking to me for several hours invariably conclude that my talents are wasted as a software engineer, I have so much potential and should seek greater outlets.
Did I have time to do this? Absolutely. Just spend less time netsurfing, watching videos, or hanging out in chatrooms or message boards, that would have covered it for sure.
I keep thinking of that line from Hamilton: Got a lot farther by working a lot harder / By being a self-starter. I only ever work hard to please a boss or family member. I don't know how to self-start for more than a short time.
I'm haunted by, of all things, a Star Trek episode):
Hasn't that been the problem all along? Throughout your career you've had lofty goals, but you've never been willing to do what's necessary to attain them.
If you want to get ahead, you have to take chances, stand out in a crowd, get noticed.
...never realised how fragile life is or how important each moment must be. So his life never came into focus. He drifted for much of his career, with no plan or agenda, going from one assignment to the next, never seizing the opportunities that presented themselves. He learned to play it safe. And he never, ever got noticed by anyone.
Or maybe it was XKCD who put it best. That cycle of mediocrity isn't due to some obstacle. It's who I am. The only thing standing in the way of my dreams is that the person having them is me.
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2024.02.04 06:52 eekeereek .

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=7213199&page=submissions
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2024.02.03 22:24 1968Bladerunner Disappointed daughter

I recently bought 'It Ends With Us' & 'It Starts With Us' for my 21yo daughter. Like many her age she's not read much since leaving High school, so when she asked for books (one of my passions) as an early birthday present I was overjoyed, & rushed to order them.
She started reading but quickly found herself being pulled out of the immersive experience, not by external forces but by the sheer volume of errors in spelling / formatting / punctuation / typos that seem to abound them both.
As an avid reader of the Literotica website I regularly find similar issues, but am happy to take into account that those stories are written largely by amateurs, self-published &, most importantly, free - not (apparently) edited, proofed, published and costly volumes.
I am absolutely appalled that these works are being foisted on the paying public in such a state, and gutted that her introduction to the joy that is reading as a young adult has been marred with substandard products.
A disgruntled dad!
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2024.01.28 21:14 Heathen129 Book Reviews 1/28/24

Book Reviews 1/28/24
Big reading week for me. Stand out works by Virgil Knightly, starting with Midnight Nanny...which I wont review due to it not being for this sub. I will say you should go buy it now since it is thoroughly enjoyable. I will also say I KNOW why everyone hates Nickelback. Now onto the Reviews Starting with

The Mook Maker


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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/530450/the-mook-make

This is a FTB story that grows on you quickly if you can get past the first bit or so. One of the things you have to keep in mind is that the entire story released now takes place in little over two weeks. You can actually see the author progress in capabilities and the story gets more polished as they write.

It is pretty enjoyable and the premise was interesting to me. I would have liked to have seen the MC get his feet a little faster then he did...but again it just feels like it takes a long time because so many chapters VS how long it actually is in story. Still a quality offering that I recommend keeping a eye on.



Satans Sorority Girls 4


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This was so Rote and paint by numbers I dont really know what to say. I do find it kind of refreshing that in 4 books there are still only three love interest. Hell Robyn has been on the cover twice so that is kind of new. Have not seen that really since Death Makes Me Stronger.

The Plot with Toby and his end was just so time consuming it felt like. I mean it is a Eric Vall novel so you know where you are going to end up which is fine, but at least the can make the journey enjoyable or interesting. It really did not feel like they explored thier powers at all except for one thing to see if the MC had one. The author also did not flesh out more in the relationships...it really felt like the author just phoned this one in.

One glaring thing that stood out was that he brought Fiona whos talent is to read and manipulate emotions to speak with the police chief VS Samantha who can read minds. Later they try top hand wave it away saying Samantha can only do that to people who she has a personal connection with....but if she fretted about Chrissy's disappearance as much as the author would have had us believe then she would have been al over the precinct. She would have had that connection...we see that because she has almost 0 connection with Mohala yet she can read his mind some.

Anyway will I read the next book..yes. It's good filler for that inbetween time when other authors are not releasing anything.



Master Class 1&2

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\*ALL HAIL HER MAJESTY MIYARI HEARTHSONG. CHAMPION WORM EATER, WARRIOR PEANUT PRINCESS, CONQUERER OF DUNGEONS....*\**and her papa...I guess he's ok too.

Seriously I slept on this series until it was recommended by Rechan, last week. Now Virgil Knightly can be hit or miss for me sometimes. I usually dont like MC's that if they were not the main character they would be almost indistinguishable from a bully in a John Hughes film. I believe he once said his characters were a Chad with a heart.

Annabelle Hawthorne I pretty much dropped her stuff since I started Home For Horny Monsters when it was on literotica. But since Rechan, recommended it I figured why not....and I am so so so glad I did.

Eli is someone you can find in almost every VA or VFW or American Legion in the US...or sadly on the streets as well. Both these authors captured pretty well not just the alienation felt but also the disassociation. It's really hard to relate to someone without that shared experience.

Not only are the love interest well crafted and executed but the children in the orphanage is as well. From angsty teen boy to valley girl. The way you see the children progress and hear them discuss their future makes sense and sounds like real kids. My three standouts are Mayari, Slypnir (I too would ask for a napping class) and Jaysen. That poor boy Jaysen really needs a win. Mayari is going to drag him to greatness weather he likes it or not. Mayari is the reason actors say they wont work with children or pets...she steals every scene she is in.

The one Eli uses enchanting is one of those eureka moments like why has this not been done. Yes we seen enchanters do temp buffs in other novels and maybe even tattoos and such...but to go how he did it was a cool way to go about it.

You can tell that a ton of love and effort went into this work. It shows through and through and this is a big big recommend for anyone that has not read this series yet.

Two gripes though is with the audible portion. First why is the male narrator doing the girls interludes. These are the girls thoughts and feelings and motivations yet Jessica Threet is not doing them....that just stands out as a glaring misstep. Second the Male VA was messing up on some names like calling Cyrus by the name Hebus a few times.

This series is so good I was about to jump on their Succubus Summoner but the first review I read says that the authors spend the first 50pages and the last 50 pages shitting on religion as a whole. I try to avoid stuff like that personally.



DreadKnight


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First let me say I am pretty leery of Sarah Hawkes works. She has a habit of the bait and switch so whenever she is involved I always wait for the other shoe to drop al la Aiden Phoenix or J. Scott Miles.

This book can be broken down to what's in a name. The only one that is convinced that Duncan is not a Paladin is him. The only ones convinced that Kithani's a angel is him as well. The characters of this book have a stand out quality of being consistent. They are who they are. There is no I was a strong intelligent woman who was kicking ass right up until the MC showed up...now I cant remember to breath in or out unless they tell me.

The women do really kick ass. No wallflowers here. These ladies know what they are doing know what thier goal is and how to get it done. Vess is skillful, willful and reliable. Kithani's personality changes when she does and has a solid reason wise that makes sense in the world. The story felt like a solid story then they through spicy scenes on it. It really should have been broken up into two longer books though I think. That way they had time to flesh out the characters and give the relationships time to marinate.

Even the other Male characters in the book are not cheeseball douchebags meant for the MC to show how bad ass he is off them. They actually have motivations that make real world sense.

And Roderick

He grunted. “An angel, an elf wizardess…I’m fairly certain I’ve seen Jewel throwing you glances as well. What is it with you and women?” I shrugged. “Probably all the scars.” “I have scars.” “Not visible ones. That baby face isn’t doing you any favors.” Roderick gave me a sour look. “Guess I should grow a beard.” “Can you?” “That’s hardly the point,” he muttered, scratching at the rather pathetic multi-day stubble on his chin.

Hawke, Sarah. Dread Knight: A Post-Apocalyptic Fantasy Harem (p. 439). Jade Fantasy. Kindle Edition.

I feel your pain brother I really do.



So this is what I put eyes on this week and I enjoyed all of them. What have you guys got up to? I am going to get into Master Class 3 and Renegade Ravergers 4 this week the rest who nows...probably Goblin Apocalypse and Magi Reborn. Was kinda waiting for the audio on them but both series are so good that it is hard not to read them already.
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2024.01.21 03:32 Hyperionxv17 Who said it's not still great?

Wife and I had the most fantastic sex today in years. I mean, who says it's not still good, lol? It was freaking mind blowing good. I still feel the afterglow from it.
We were busy packing for our upcoming move next month and she decided to initiate, yes! My God, sorry God, didn't mean to involve you in this, but wow, I won't write a Penthouse Forum post or Literotica story, but people saying it cannot still be like this when you are older, are just misinformed or unfortunate. I am seriously hornier than I was as a teen and I didn't have any real life partner like this to make the fantasies real life. I mean, she dressed up in lingerie and heels and we did everything a couple can do, well almost I guess, lol, and it lasted hours! I think that is the best oral I've ever had and I kissed every square inch of her body over and over. My, how can people think you cannot have sex like this when you are older?
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2024.01.16 04:40 KaoticCub Searching for a Werewolf story

I read a werewolf story a long time ago about a hung straight dude that flies to a new job, takes his assistant camping, and is seduced into fucking him, becoming a werewolf in the process and an Alpha down the road. Turns out his adopted dad is an alpha for sun lycanthropes? He also adopts a werekid later. Thought it was on Literotica but can't find it now. Really liked the love story on top of the sex. Any help would be appreciated
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2024.01.14 07:48 Fit529Dotcom Islamic character advice?

I'm writing a medium-long story for Literotica. I have written other stories with Jewish characters and had some success with them because It's not a focus of the character. It's a happenstantial attribute.
I've recently started this medium - long story and I've been wanting to put an Islamic character in some of the same odd situations I've put my other characters.
In this case, a precipitous marriage to a normal Joe Protestant character. I want the marriage to be true to some Islamic traditions but not oppressively so. Meaning, it's precipitous, for plot reason so It has to happen super fast.
My problem is I don't know how to get advice from a person who's Islamic about two things: one, are the Islamic characters depicted in vaguely realistic ways, and two, is the action going to be seriously insulting to anyone.
It's an erotic story, but the eroticism happens after the marriage. So technically they're allowed to do that. I know no matter what I'm going to probably insult somebody, but I want to minimize that over stupid s*** I might put in a story that I don't absolutely need to have be there.
Any advice on how I can find someone to read my story, or at least Read the section of the story and tell me if it's stupid or wrong or vaguely okay or stuff like that? Yes, it's erotic, so I think I'd feel weird calling a random mosque and asking if I can have the imam read my stuff. Talk about a crazy conversation! Hello, please read this erotic story for me. Lol.
Sorry for being a long-winded.
For pot reasons I want to have some Arabic in there too. So some advice on how to translate phrases might be cool too. Since Google translate can sometimes be highly unreliable.
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2024.01.10 20:46 mythical_writer Erotica story generator

I'm an erotica reader (aspiring writer), who made this AI generated erotic story app. I made it because there were stories with specific situations, pairing types and environments I wanted to read, but I couldn't find them on Literotica and/or knew there was little chance a writer would be writing that.
I recently got the NSFW functionality working, so I'd love for anyone interested in erotica shorts to use it and let me know what you think. It also has sharing functionality, so if you do make something you like, feel free to link it.
To note: I find it useful for erotica shorts, but doesn't do as well with long-form.
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