Biwi ka chudwaya

I'm no writer and English is my third language. Please don't trash me or my punctuation.
Firstly, mallikajan becoming suddenly patriotic is absurd. It was almost like she had nothing in her hands and she's trying to fill the void of the fall of heeramandi. Like see, it has to be gradual atleast.
My alternate version
MALLIKAJAAN
In the scene where bibbojaan sneaks in the freedom fighters(yes, they very much were) mallikajan stares at her stoic before walking away. We find them in the next scene spoken to by phatto - satto all the things Mallika had originally said. One of the fighters embrace the other remembering the demise of the shaheed when a potli falls open from his pocket. We see jhumke and some rings which Mallika recognises and calls him out saying they are of waheeda almost accusing them of theft. Bibbo responds rather angrily " Ammi!!!" When waheeda interrupts and says she had given them the jewellery . Waheeda goes "takreeban 20 saalon me Pehli dafa jisam par se kuch utaarne par Mera rooh aitiraz nahi kiya." A little taken aback, Mallika walks away saying "Noor Haveli k chaar tijori aapke aur aapke biwi bacchon k liye khule hi."
I feel like it would still preserve her character a little and from here she could have been shown to have gone soft ( you know, with her requesting nawab's wife to talk to other nawab's for her). I know it was not pretence, but her being patriotic was a little off.
When mallikarjaan hears that bibbojaan is getting executed, she breaks down crying. Next scene is her in her room all cried out. Looks at bibbojaan's picture and mutters "meri beti...meri beti bibbo... bibbojaan.... Bibbojaan azaad." We see satto fatto and all the members gathered crying over the news mallikajaan enters , commands them not to cry as bibbo would be the first tawaif to sacrifice her life for her mother( India).
TAJDER
Tajder comes home injured and Alam questions him and he had to reveal that he was manhandled by the British while they were protesting ( he wore black muffler and wasn't recognised though). Alamzeb asks "Aap ye mulk se beintehaa mohabbat karte ho na?" And tajder chuckles and says " jaise aap apne shayari se" and alamzeb goes "shayari ko ham hamara fitoor maante hi par aap mitti ko apna farz. As she wipes his injuries she asks in a soft tone " nibhate hue kese lagta hi?". " Filhaal..... Jaise ek zakhmi maa ko unka beta marham na de paraha" says tajder teary eyed. So maybe here a montage of atrocities of British he has witnessed could be shown as he explains alamzeb why he he'd become anti British. By this the freedom factor is a little more emphasized rather than it being abrupt , also, it invokes patriotism in alamzeb.
ALAMZEB
Alamzeb literally gave it away saying that sher infront of general Cartwright, he very much speaks hindi 🤦‍♀️.
In the alternative version alam while being taken into the jail screams "inqilab zindabad" and tajder is shown to be secretly Proud. Tajder looks at her fondly while she shouts naare and her parwana sher gets played simultaneously.
And in another scene a little after Alam's realise mallikajaan says to alam: "Heeramandi ki shehzadi ho tum. Yaha ki mehek sirf eethar ki hi, na sihayi ki na hi lahoon ki ."
Alamzeb says to herself, "Hamara pyaar(tajder) ka manchaaha eethar tho ghili mitti hi ammi. Is zaameen ki mehek mehfooz rakhenge, apni lahoo se mitti nam karke hi sahi."
(Tajder says he loves ghili mitti just before it rains in the mango farm.)
FAREEDAN
Fareedan's change was rather abrupt. It's just not too convincing.
ALTERNATE VERSION

 Cartwright tells fareedan how mallikjaan had her stoop so low infront of everyone in the police station. Fareedan laughs hard and asks him what has he done. Cartwright explains what happened and when he turns around fareedan looks rather quiet unable to figure out how to feel about it. When Cartwright asks her what happened she says the dialogue she originally does. Cartwright asks her to be happy for him and his boys as they wouldn't get an opportunity like this in England cause a true lady would never sleep with five me. He proceeds to say this only happened because she's an Indian wh*re. This strucks her, she quietly leaves his house placing his gift, that gown on the table. At night during the fountain scene fareedan overhears everything from her window and sheds a tear. Fareedan witnesses Cartwright killing tajder deliberately. She runs and tells that to alam who is still in shock and is repeatedly saying she needs to see dadi. Fareedan takes her to dadi and while is upstairs Cartwright visits Tajder's father who is confronting him. Fareedan walking down the staircase says how she witnessed his death and it was Cartwright who killed his son. Cartwright says that he doesn't know her and if at all she had ever been in a police station it would be because of crimes she committed and he names few off her records intimating that he knows about her past. Fareedan feeling deceived and disrespected she is not afraid of what is going to happen to her and that Tajder's father deserves to know the truth. She tells him how she witnessed him killing his son. Cartwright interrupts and says she is afterall a tawaif and he shouldn't listen to her words. Fareedan says that she's tawaif indeed but she had a mother who take care of her all night when she was sick. She can only imagine what Tajder's father is going through and that he deserves to know the truth. She says he isn't her father or a relative but you don't need a blood relation in this mulk. She calls him khalujaan and asks him to believe her. Tajder's father walks away from her and asks Cartwright to try finding out who the attackers were and walks away indicating that he believes Cartwright and not her. Cartwright mockingly says to her that true Indians only believe the ones who are working for their welfare, the british. Fardeen walks out hurt and disappointed. 

These two incidents can makes fareedan's change more gradual.
CARTWRIGHT
I don't understand why Cartwright would want to sleep with Alam when his sister literally murdered his higher authority and is about to get killed by them. Moreover, he killed Alam's fiance. He has grave threat from Alam.
Alternate version:-

 CARTWRIGHT visits heeramandi's silent corridors and mocks mallikajaan. 

He proceeds to say had she been on his side it would have saved her from many troubles. Alam interrupts and says that she's the next huzoor of heeramandi, the next tawaif. She'd do her first dance, her first nath uthrai for him in return of him not causing the members of heeramandi any further troubles. Cartwright interrupts her and says he wants her nath uthrai not in their fort but in his bedroom. Mallika interrupts reminding how the ritual goes. Alam stares at Cartwright before agreeing. In the later scene she performs infront of him and in the end gets on the top of him stabs him to death in sync with the beat of the music and leaves his house.
THE CLIMAX

 Mallikajaan marches towards the police station with everyone to support bibbojaan. Iqbal riding cart nexts to her stops her suddenly with a talvar reluctantly and says she doesn't deserve a last time with her daughter like he was never given one with saima. Satto fatto shocked asks what he's doing. He cries and wipes his tears and backs away. Mallikajaan looks at fareedan who looks concerned for her. She walks right into the talvar to everyone's horror. Satto fatto and everyone tries to come near her but she asks them to go. Fareedan asks Mallika to come with them and says that bibbojaan will need her mother, she needs to treat herself and that ammi ki zarurat hothi hi. Mallika says her daughter will live kuch pal too without her like she( fareedan) did all these years. She insists on them leaving and being there for bibbojaan. They all March towards the execution place. Bibbojaan is given a last chance to reveal the other members of her group. She is hit with whiplash when she starts singing with all the women from heeramandi behind the walls chorusing with her. Simultaneously mallikajaan is shown dancing while bleeding in a silent , windy and deserted street singing to herself. She pats her feet covered in mud on the ground like she's dancing in her fort, does gajgamini walk manically laughing. Bibbojaan doesn't reveal the names so the officer intimates to kill her. On the other hand mallikajaan is dancing while bleeding with dirt and blood on her face. Tired She falls on her knees. She hears footsteps approaching her running. She sees zoravar (her son) with his hand streched out running towards her calling her ammi. Bullets are shot at bibbojaan simultaneously. Mallikajaan picks up the sword next to her and tears open her blouse from the back and falls on the ground. Zorawar stops and turns away his head. Mallika is seen smiling slowly closing her eyes (preserving her nature of vengeance). Bibbojaan is shown to lay on ground slowly finishing the last word of the song. Her eyes wide open, she loses her life. The narration says bibbojaan has inspired all the beti's of heeramandi to take part in freeing their country. They March and roit religiously from then on to get freedom to this country as no one understands the value of freedom better than the ones who's soul is not even theirs. 

I wanted to ask, how can you know in an AM setup, if a guy wants to marry for a biwi or a bahu?
Sometimes I feel like guys just marry to get their family a bahu. There is a difference then in how they treat the girl and their relationship.
Eg. if there is a feud between the mother in law and the daughter in law, these guys usually see it as a saas bahu ke apas ka mamla but if the guy has married for a wife, he'll probably see it as a feud between HIS mother and HIS wife and is more likely to intervene and sort the situation out.
What do you guys think?

I have met BHAIJAAN he uses an iPhone 13 pro max
Also Sanju Baba has a blackberry passport
Alia kjo ki bitiya uses a Z Flip 4
RK sabka boyfriend uses the same
Varunardo DiDhawanio uses a Note10plus
Mimi Sanon uses a iPhone
Virat ki Biwi uses Oneplus Open
Anushka ka mard uses an iPhone
Kunal Khemu uses a Remarkable
Kylie Kapoor and parivar uses an iPhone ... Tell me your observations... Wait I know its all iPhone

When nalla was begging for votes, Sargun promoted him on her story and asked her followers to vote for him but this nalla and nalli did not post anything to promote her movie( jiski premier mein yeh gaye the) Phir bhi koi story nahi daali!
And because this time it is THE FARAH KHAN " both selfish Miya biwi are promoting her YouTube page!
Kitne mean, selfish and double face hain yeh dono Miya biwi perfectly made for each other...!!
Nalle joh bhi kar le Farah apni movie mein tujhe ek naukar ka role bhi nahi degi!!

Hi. Need suggestion. Divorce isn't the answer. Be kind while commenting.
This is a post on behalf of a very close friend.
Us ka husband us ko cheat kr rha hy. They both are beautiful, have a beautiful baby, beautiful house. The girl is doing a good job, the guy is in a startup. Larky ki trf se pyar ki initiation thi. Love marriage. Past main bhe us k affair reh chuky. Shadi k bad office ki aik larki, jo aik ameer ar. My personnel ki beti hy, us k sath affair hy. On & off. Us larki k parents tk bat le k gy, they smjhana bujhana, chup seen... Kuch arsy bad phr se start.
Pesa bht hy larki k pas, to wo anny waa lutaati hy larky py. And the guy feels empowerment k us ki aashiq hy wo larki. The wife, i personally know, is a loving, humble person, religious, up to dated, Takes care of herself, him, does everything that an ideal wife does. Ramzan me roz late ghr ata. Biwi ko kehta hy k aram se ammi k ghr reh lo kuch din. I'll be ok. (trying to get time for the other girl). Wo larki psychos ki trha bar bar calls krti thi, block hony k bawajood (history me ajata hy). Now they are agin in contact, to what extent, don't know. Phly bht acha tha, ab biwi se tinak k bat krta hy.
I suggested her couple therapy, but he isn't willing since he's dishonest. Us ny sb back py rkh k apny ap ko achy se carry kr k life me aagy brh rhi hy. Magar ye dusri aurat k msly se me bht worried hoon. Dua, wazeefa everything is going on. Husband, wife ki family me b yeh bat ho chuki, us ny maafi b mang li thi. Still us fzool aurat k sath lg gya hy ab. His father has 2 families, his mom suffered from this. But this shouldn't be the jawaaz to do the same.
Your kind suggestions can help. Jazaakillah

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Bhai ye telegram paper leak real hai kya 😭. Ek to itne paise bhi nhi hai mere pass 😭. Baaki baccho ka mst jaara jinhone purchase Kara. 90/90 question match hore bc. Idhar mehnat karke 90%ile ke aage nhi jaati. Waise bohot gareeb hu mei koi free mei hi dedo 8th April 1st shift ka. Tumhari maa ko dua lgegi.. biwi Sundar milegi...bacche pyaare honge..ambani ki poti se shaadi kar lenge.

Meine ek chiz hamesha se observe kiya hain, Shoaib k vlogs me DKI ki sabse ghatiya, messy, untidy looks and questionable behaviors nazar ati hain which even sometimes make her look mentally unstable chahe wo DKI messy baal ho, paglet ki tarah hassi ho, chahe uski rona ho, Shoaib Ibrahim captures all those moments which people SIMPLY HATE ABOUT HER.
He literally zooms in on her dull untidy face when she makes those cringe noise or has those (annoying) laughter attacks. When she cries he straight turns his camera on and again asks her to explain why she was crying, which further instigate people to comment "phirse overacting kar rahi hain"... !
I remember when they were living at Saba's place with new born Ruhaan, SI used to capture most exhausting looks of DKi where she looked pathetically messed up. Remember DkI's meaningless psycho laughter at the food court of Jio mall and how she was trolled for that !? He infact zooms on her face to make the whole thing uglier for the audiences !! Sometimes I noticed he randomly turns camera on her while she instantly tries to fix her messy state and hair. Not even going to talk about the recent vlog!
Ek "ideal" husband jo apne begum se "beshumar mohobbat" karte hain, wo kyun apne vlogs me aise aise moments rakhega jiske liye unke biwi ur bhi zyada troll ho ?? Agar apko apke biwi ka aise "childish" behavior itna pasand, to rakhho apne ghar ke andar na.. Rona ya paglet ki tarah hasne ko kyun content banake thumbnails banate ho? Agar usko kuch bother nehi karta or infact agar wo khud apko bol rahi hain ye sab dikhao, phirbhi as a loving husband, apko to avoid karna chahiye wo sab vlogs me dalna kyunki apko pata hain log apke begum ko troll karenge? HAIN KI NEHI??
BUT NO.. HE DOESN'T bother to do that because his passive aggressive self enjoys how people bash DKi for her cringe overacting and later during ask me anything session on Instagram, he picks those questions related to DKi being trolled or how people hate her loud laughter and he gives some pathbreaking ( he thinks) ans to make headlines for some paid media next day!

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Bhai tum log jo bhi jee ka prepare kr rhe ho shi mai interest hai maths physics chem mai ki kyu hoti hai kis liye hoti isko smjhne mai maza aata tum logo ko ya boring lgta hai Bus tum jee kr rhe ho ki carrer secure hojayega society mai respect milegi bhut achi biwi milegi Better opportunity milenge iit mai aur logo ne bol diya.. Just puch rha hun rat race mai toh nhi mere tarah