Baap beti ki kahani

I'm no writer and English is my third language. Please don't trash me or my punctuation.
Firstly, mallikajan becoming suddenly patriotic is absurd. It was almost like she had nothing in her hands and she's trying to fill the void of the fall of heeramandi. Like see, it has to be gradual atleast.
My alternate version
MALLIKAJAAN
In the scene where bibbojaan sneaks in the freedom fighters(yes, they very much were) mallikajan stares at her stoic before walking away. We find them in the next scene spoken to by phatto - satto all the things Mallika had originally said. One of the fighters embrace the other remembering the demise of the shaheed when a potli falls open from his pocket. We see jhumke and some rings which Mallika recognises and calls him out saying they are of waheeda almost accusing them of theft. Bibbo responds rather angrily " Ammi!!!" When waheeda interrupts and says she had given them the jewellery . Waheeda goes "takreeban 20 saalon me Pehli dafa jisam par se kuch utaarne par Mera rooh aitiraz nahi kiya." A little taken aback, Mallika walks away saying "Noor Haveli k chaar tijori aapke aur aapke biwi bacchon k liye khule hi."
I feel like it would still preserve her character a little and from here she could have been shown to have gone soft ( you know, with her requesting nawab's wife to talk to other nawab's for her). I know it was not pretence, but her being patriotic was a little off.
When mallikarjaan hears that bibbojaan is getting executed, she breaks down crying. Next scene is her in her room all cried out. Looks at bibbojaan's picture and mutters "meri beti...meri beti bibbo... bibbojaan.... Bibbojaan azaad." We see satto fatto and all the members gathered crying over the news mallikajaan enters , commands them not to cry as bibbo would be the first tawaif to sacrifice her life for her mother( India).
TAJDER
Tajder comes home injured and Alam questions him and he had to reveal that he was manhandled by the British while they were protesting ( he wore black muffler and wasn't recognised though). Alamzeb asks "Aap ye mulk se beintehaa mohabbat karte ho na?" And tajder chuckles and says " jaise aap apne shayari se" and alamzeb goes "shayari ko ham hamara fitoor maante hi par aap mitti ko apna farz. As she wipes his injuries she asks in a soft tone " nibhate hue kese lagta hi?". " Filhaal..... Jaise ek zakhmi maa ko unka beta marham na de paraha" says tajder teary eyed. So maybe here a montage of atrocities of British he has witnessed could be shown as he explains alamzeb why he he'd become anti British. By this the freedom factor is a little more emphasized rather than it being abrupt , also, it invokes patriotism in alamzeb.
ALAMZEB
Alamzeb literally gave it away saying that sher infront of general Cartwright, he very much speaks hindi 🤦‍♀️.
In the alternative version alam while being taken into the jail screams "inqilab zindabad" and tajder is shown to be secretly Proud. Tajder looks at her fondly while she shouts naare and her parwana sher gets played simultaneously.
And in another scene a little after Alam's realise mallikajaan says to alam: "Heeramandi ki shehzadi ho tum. Yaha ki mehek sirf eethar ki hi, na sihayi ki na hi lahoon ki ."
Alamzeb says to herself, "Hamara pyaar(tajder) ka manchaaha eethar tho ghili mitti hi ammi. Is zaameen ki mehek mehfooz rakhenge, apni lahoo se mitti nam karke hi sahi."
(Tajder says he loves ghili mitti just before it rains in the mango farm.)
FAREEDAN
Fareedan's change was rather abrupt. It's just not too convincing.
ALTERNATE VERSION

 Cartwright tells fareedan how mallikjaan had her stoop so low infront of everyone in the police station. Fareedan laughs hard and asks him what has he done. Cartwright explains what happened and when he turns around fareedan looks rather quiet unable to figure out how to feel about it. When Cartwright asks her what happened she says the dialogue she originally does. Cartwright asks her to be happy for him and his boys as they wouldn't get an opportunity like this in England cause a true lady would never sleep with five me. He proceeds to say this only happened because she's an Indian wh*re. This strucks her, she quietly leaves his house placing his gift, that gown on the table. At night during the fountain scene fareedan overhears everything from her window and sheds a tear. Fareedan witnesses Cartwright killing tajder deliberately. She runs and tells that to alam who is still in shock and is repeatedly saying she needs to see dadi. Fareedan takes her to dadi and while is upstairs Cartwright visits Tajder's father who is confronting him. Fareedan walking down the staircase says how she witnessed his death and it was Cartwright who killed his son. Cartwright says that he doesn't know her and if at all she had ever been in a police station it would be because of crimes she committed and he names few off her records intimating that he knows about her past. Fareedan feeling deceived and disrespected she is not afraid of what is going to happen to her and that Tajder's father deserves to know the truth. She tells him how she witnessed him killing his son. Cartwright interrupts and says she is afterall a tawaif and he shouldn't listen to her words. Fareedan says that she's tawaif indeed but she had a mother who take care of her all night when she was sick. She can only imagine what Tajder's father is going through and that he deserves to know the truth. She says he isn't her father or a relative but you don't need a blood relation in this mulk. She calls him khalujaan and asks him to believe her. Tajder's father walks away from her and asks Cartwright to try finding out who the attackers were and walks away indicating that he believes Cartwright and not her. Cartwright mockingly says to her that true Indians only believe the ones who are working for their welfare, the british. Fardeen walks out hurt and disappointed. 

These two incidents can makes fareedan's change more gradual.
CARTWRIGHT
I don't understand why Cartwright would want to sleep with Alam when his sister literally murdered his higher authority and is about to get killed by them. Moreover, he killed Alam's fiance. He has grave threat from Alam.
Alternate version:-

 CARTWRIGHT visits heeramandi's silent corridors and mocks mallikajaan. 

He proceeds to say had she been on his side it would have saved her from many troubles. Alam interrupts and says that she's the next huzoor of heeramandi, the next tawaif. She'd do her first dance, her first nath uthrai for him in return of him not causing the members of heeramandi any further troubles. Cartwright interrupts her and says he wants her nath uthrai not in their fort but in his bedroom. Mallika interrupts reminding how the ritual goes. Alam stares at Cartwright before agreeing. In the later scene she performs infront of him and in the end gets on the top of him stabs him to death in sync with the beat of the music and leaves his house.
THE CLIMAX

 Mallikajaan marches towards the police station with everyone to support bibbojaan. Iqbal riding cart nexts to her stops her suddenly with a talvar reluctantly and says she doesn't deserve a last time with her daughter like he was never given one with saima. Satto fatto shocked asks what he's doing. He cries and wipes his tears and backs away. Mallikajaan looks at fareedan who looks concerned for her. She walks right into the talvar to everyone's horror. Satto fatto and everyone tries to come near her but she asks them to go. Fareedan asks Mallika to come with them and says that bibbojaan will need her mother, she needs to treat herself and that ammi ki zarurat hothi hi. Mallika says her daughter will live kuch pal too without her like she( fareedan) did all these years. She insists on them leaving and being there for bibbojaan. They all March towards the execution place. Bibbojaan is given a last chance to reveal the other members of her group. She is hit with whiplash when she starts singing with all the women from heeramandi behind the walls chorusing with her. Simultaneously mallikajaan is shown dancing while bleeding in a silent , windy and deserted street singing to herself. She pats her feet covered in mud on the ground like she's dancing in her fort, does gajgamini walk manically laughing. Bibbojaan doesn't reveal the names so the officer intimates to kill her. On the other hand mallikajaan is dancing while bleeding with dirt and blood on her face. Tired She falls on her knees. She hears footsteps approaching her running. She sees zoravar (her son) with his hand streched out running towards her calling her ammi. Bullets are shot at bibbojaan simultaneously. Mallikajaan picks up the sword next to her and tears open her blouse from the back and falls on the ground. Zorawar stops and turns away his head. Mallika is seen smiling slowly closing her eyes (preserving her nature of vengeance). Bibbojaan is shown to lay on ground slowly finishing the last word of the song. Her eyes wide open, she loses her life. The narration says bibbojaan has inspired all the beti's of heeramandi to take part in freeing their country. They March and roit religiously from then on to get freedom to this country as no one understands the value of freedom better than the ones who's soul is not even theirs. 

Agar sirf meri life affect hoti isse toh seh bhi leti, even drop ka bhi soch leti but it hurts so much when I think of my parents.
Exam mera hai but they are giving it with me as well. Everyday dropping me on the centre, pay for the mocks, accept my decisions, travel costs, accomodation, everything. They have such high hopes
Kal hi when I was leaving for exam, my aunt was talking to someone on phone ki "Ye ab Bcom ke bhi entrance de rahe hai. Khud ka toh pata nahi, maa baap ko pareshan kar rakha hai" and said that my exam isn't that important. Getting selected in NC is going to be a tight slap on such people's faces. I want my parents to feel proud. I don't want their sacrifices to go in vain. Mujhe bhul jao but agar selection nahi hua toh mere parents ko toh bass "I told you so" wale reaction aayege sab se
I should study for accountancy but I really needed to vent. NTA doesn't care about our lives. They are just in a hurry to complete the examination before elections. Bc ye elections public ke liye hi hai na. So that public can choose what's best for them. Iske victim bhi hum hi hai. Just think about the person jiske first day hi 10 questions reh gaye. Kis mindset ke sath dega woh next exam. I'm so tensed rn. Glad that this shitshow is going to end today but I have no idea how to deal with what's coming up next

So I am a dropper neet ke liye thi but didn't go as planned mera mood medical se 12th mai he uth Gaya tha I wanted to give other exams and try out my luck but parents said fuck you. Nahi hoga Terese neet mai he reh i so badly wanted to give clat and uceed I am not disappointed with neet tbh this exam doesn't intrest me anymore maa chudaye sunn lungi gaali mereko nhi karna aur science wagera so I thought of appearing in cuet guess what woh bhi chud gayi 🤣🤣i hopped ki shyd cuet deke stream change karlu 🤣 no i don't think mujhe off campus bhi milega man. I am so tired i want to move on from this entrance exam stuff the anxiety loneliness the frustration I am tired of it honestly. I wish maa baap ne mujhe clat dene diya hota at least let me try then they say they never stopped me from doing anything LIES🤡 manipulative ahh shit told me I would be jobless I would be begging on road agar law mai gayi toh said log kya bolenge? And then they've the audacity to say to my relatives ki humne toh ise kisi cheez ke liye nhi roka 🥺 my ass. I TRIED TO FALL IN LOVE WITH SCIENCE BHAI I COULDN'T MY BRAIN IS ROTTEN ITS FRIED AUR NHI HOTA I DONT FEEL THE SAME WAY FOR THIS SUBJECT LIKE I USED TO IN 10TH COMPETITIVE EXAMS HAVE RUINED IT FOR ME PLEASE LET ME MOVE ON FROM THIS GOD PLEASE i tried all I could. abhi ke liye chill mar leti cause I know the moment the results are dropped mom and dad would come for my ass saying I am disappointment (which I am) I have wasted their time and money. The efforts don't matter bro not even to your parents they only And only want results I am telling you no one appreciates or sees it they just want results. Prepration ke time they might say oh we are with you ho jayega we will never scold and boom the moment they see the results they'll come for your ass left right I have so much in my chest and they don't even want to listen I am tired of science please please let me move on I am not that smart for science please 🙏

Haan sahi padha aapne, maine farts hi likha hai. Jaise Bachpan mein school mein sikhate the na God is omnipresent. Waise hi farts bhi omnipresent hain. Sab jagah hote hain. Ek baar mujhe kaam tha ek teacher se toh main unki class mein gayi. Jaise hi maine unki class mein enter kiya. Mujhe bohot hi gandi smell aayi. Kisi bachche ne fart kiya tha. It smelled putrid, it actually smelled like a dead animal.
Main ek baar dusre ek teacher ke class mein gayi thi toh woh apne dupatta muh pe rakh ke khade the aur bol rahe the ki subah toilet jake aana chahiye school mein.
Mere tuition mein bhi ek ladke ka digestion itna kharab tha ki kya kahoon. Woh baitha baitha itna ganda fart karta tha. Upar se dusre ladke bhi usko dekhle khud bhi fart karne lage. Phir do teen ladke aise the ki woh shamelessly zor zor se fart karne lage aur phir hanste the. Mujhe us ladke ki mummy ko batana pada ki woh bohot fart karta hai. Toh uski mummy ne kaha ki uski dawai li hai.
Mere khud ke class mein pichle saal sirf ek baar aisa hua tha ki kisine bohot hi smelly fart kiya tha. Mujhe already pata tha ki woh kaun ho sakta hai. Ek hi ladki aisi thi jo underweight thi aur theek se khana nahi khati thi, uski mummy ne mujhe kaha tha ki aap isko bolna khaye. Maine us ladki ko puchha aur usne accept kiya ki usne hi fart kiya hai.
Mere Nani jab mere Ghar rehne aaye the na. Toh jab mujhe fart karna hota toh main unse dur chali jati thi. Maine nani se kaha I respect you so, I am standing away from you while I fart. My Nani said it's okay, you don't have to. She said that sometimes nanaji used to fart and cover her face with the blanket.
Mere papa ek baar bata rahe the ki unke ek neighborhood mein ek family rehti thi. Unki beti chhoti thi toh woh bolti thi humare Ghar mein koi fart nahi karta hai.
I don't know why par mujhe farts Hindi mein bolna achha nahi lagta. Family ke samne bol leti hoon. Lekin bahar ke logon ke samne farts hi bolti hoon.
Apne kabhi yeh omnipresent farts experience kare hain, aisi jagah mein jahan aap kuch bol nahi sakte out of respect?
Edit- jab mein tuition mein Sanskrit mein parts of the body padhati hoon aur jab foot ko sanskrit mein पादः bolti hoon tab bachche bohot smile karte hain.

Dekho im 17F, abhii in 12th and preparing for jee 2025 from a good coaching centre in my hometown. I come from a upper middle class family and my parents are quite (very) well to do. My dad dropped sci in his 10th and built his way up the corporate ladder just with a bcom degree but he belives that engineering degree will help me in my future.
For me, as a student I mad the mistake of showing interest in sci when I was young. 8th,9th mein I was kaafi into sci because it was mostly into theory. i learned a couple of coding languages and did robotics mein kaafi kuch, even went to the US for a robotics competition.
I was pretty aginst becoming engineer as I felt it was what everyone was doing and was happy I had the privilege to choose. i also took some courses with MIT( usa waala) on quantum computing cuz I liked theoroticl physics.
Abhi mere maa baap ko laga ki mein born science prodigidy hoon.but the thing is, I love other shit too
mujhe personally economics mein bohot intrest hai, developments economics, public welfare, sociology are all things I want to learn more of and maybe pursue a future in. I love politics too! And leadership and communication has always been my string point. Debates, elecutions and public speaking is my forte. I love to be in front of a mic and handle people. I was headgirl of my school too and did a lot of management kaam there. I also like working with children as I've worked in 20+ ngos. history, psychology, geography sabh pasand hai mujhe
BIO aur performing and fine arts ke alawa sabhu cheez mein meri interest hai
mujhe upsc karna hai mostly, IFS mera sapna hai, para engineering and all ke saath idfk man
abhh dekho, i know yeh sabh a bada flex lagegga but my point is i have soooo many interests and fields i love to explore, i really don't want to do engineering, but again bcom karke normal bakwas nahi karna hai mujhe. toh isiliye when my parents convinced me to do engineering, i went with it. Now I'm no longer academically strong, I'm doing poorly in all my test and I'm thinking, kya hi fayda yeh sabka? toh pata nahi yaar sabh bada kichdi lag raha hai, toh koi kuch bata do

Our english exam was supposed to be at 3 and we got the sheets at 3:03 🤡???
Then the whole ficaso of signing in running hand with date, ma baap ka naam, kutte ka naam, application number, roll number question sheet number, time likho photo chipkao sign karo DO baar, ma baap ka naam likho, invigilator aaye toh 2-3 check kare sab aram se 10–15 min gaye phir paper lene ke liye toh aise koode jaise bandar kele ke liye bhai FUCK NTA
School ka toilet kharab, 3 mai shit bhari huyi aur 1 ki kundi gayab, ab insaan use bhi na kar paaye.
Normalisation AND grace marks hone chahiye 2 separate papers aur itti bhaadhi administration ke liye.

05 ki hoon. ek aur saal de diya phir toh 20 saal ki ho jaungi. Baaki school ke dost sab 2nd year complete kar liye honge college mein. Aur aesa koi fix nahi hota college agle saal bhi milegi.
Iss baar 550 aa raha. Papa toh obsess hi ho gaye hain ki beti ko doctor banake chodunga.
5 saal mbbs matlab 25 ki hungi jab tak khatam hoga, phir MD wagera bhi hota hai. Plus ye bhi koi jannat si course nahi hai, toxic hai bolte hain.
Idk kya kar rahi mein. Papa ko khush karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon. Aur life mein itna fail hote hote woh zeal khudmein aur aa hi nahi rahi hai ki kuch karna hai. Bas papa ke liye hi karna hai sochke 2nd drop ka socha hai.
Aur ye nahi bhi toh kya karun aur. pcb se hoon mujhe koi aur field interest nahi dilata hai plus scale bhi accha nahi dikh raha. private aur semi government nahi lena kyunki financially burden karna nahi parents ko aur.
Online se karungi iss baar. 1st drop offline liya tha. Toh tablet lene ka soch rahi par lagta hai itni bojh bane ja rahi hoon parents pe ki itna paise kharch karne ko bura lag raha.
I never imagine I'd be in this place. My younger self would so mad if she saw me today.

heard some of them saying MBBS nhi mil rha toh BAMS lelo...nothing against BAMS but wht the fuck is this going on these days...'BAMS se surgeon ban jaoge' , 'Gov BAMS promote kr rhi hai' and the most stupid one 'Rural areas mein BAMS waale accha kamate hai' etc
First of all BAMS pseudoscience hai...bc aisi degree hi kyu leni jisme aadhi cheeze galat padhayi jaa rhi hai Jo tumko pata hai ki galat hai tum phir bhi padh rhe ho...evidence based cheezo ko bhi galat maante hai bhai ab tak Ayurveda mein
second tum surgeon bann skte ho...lol appendix aur piles ke operation krne waale ko surgeon nhi bolte bhai...aur khud logically socho tumhe yeh krwana bhi hoga toh tum BAMS ke doctor ke paas jaoge ya MBBS ke doctor ke paas
'rural areas mein bohot scope hai' bc mere baap-dada ne mehnat krke gaand ghis kr paise kamaye taaki hum dhang ki jagah pr reh paaye aur mein wapas wahi chala jau...kyu?kyunki meine ek degree leli jis se mai acchi jagah pr reh kr kama nhi skta
aur bc tum kabhi apni job kyu nhi batate ho alternate career mein...teacher banwao logo ko...tumhe bhi toh lauda padhana aata nhi hai bas wahi ncert ki lines mug-up krke baccho ko chutiya bana rhe ho(woh kaun hai Anmol krke uski baat kr rha mai)
Edit:aur yeh bkl BDS ko itna downgrade kyu krte hai...kam se kam bc usme science toh hai jo kaam krti hai kuch bhi toh nhi padha dete na

Hello ladies and gentleman, this is going to be a long post. I need to get this off my chest and I prefer using a throwaway (I hope the mods approve this)
Jo kahani mein bayan kerne jaa raha hun uss se shayad sab relate na ker sakein lekin apko aek naya perspective zaroor mile ga ke ese log bhi hote hain jo ese bhi sochte hain.
For the past 2 years, I lived a very weird life, I use the word weird because the more I think about it the more it doesnt make sense. Basically, I was living in the delusion that I had found happiness. Being a very emotionally stunted person meant I was taking everything at face value, never was too happy never was too sad, always expected a fluctuation in the the straight line that is life and treated every event as such. So when all of this started, I was stupid enough to let my guard down. Bohot bachaa ke rakha tha apne aap ko, aek dafa ki thi ye ghalti pehle aur socha tha ke ab phirse nahi kerni, lekin;

‎بہک کر باغِ جنت سے چلا آیا تھا دنیا میں، سنا ہے بعد مہشر پھر اُسی جنت میں جانا ہے، چلا تو جاؤں جنت میں مگر یہ سوچ کر چُپ ہوں، میں آدمذات ہوں مجھ کو بہک جانے کی عادت ہے

Coming back to my delusion, I found a girl 😂 How I found her is not relevant, but what is relevant is what I did after finding her. Initially, it was the same old story, boy meets girl, boy likes girl, boy has red flags, girl has red flags, but the chemistry is there and they choose to work through them and make it work. Sounds nice right? Mujhe bhi soch ke kuch aesa hi laga tha 😂 Reality was different, tab socha nahi ke kitne barre imtehan mein apne aap ko daal raha hun.
Thinking back to it, I had to fight for my place. I had to fight other potential candidates, which at the time, felt like the right thing to do. Infatuation, it its most embryonic stage, has a way of blinding you with false hope. Wearing those blinds I fell into what broke me so much more as a human being that all of what I had built myself to become, I found in pieces. It was surprising to see how I had let something take so much control. I wont lie, in the moment, it was perfect, I had everything I wanted.

زلف بردوش کون آیا یہ کس کی آہٹ سے گل کھلے ہیں
مہک رہی ہے فضائے ہستی تمام عالم بہار سا ہے

A big mistake I would say would be that I trusted her with myself. When I say myself, I mean all my weaknesses that I had been hiding from the world to be this person that everyone around me depended on. I know what you must be thinking, a child is typing this and acting as if he has the burden of the world on his shoulders 😂 Unfortunately, Im an adult who is mourning what I believed to be maybe my happy ending after the endless suffering I had been through.
Another mistake from the list of many was that I made earning my forgiveness very easy. Its very normal to mess up, but messing up to a certain point is acceptable, past that point you have to set your limits, which I didnt. Sometimes its surprising to look back at how much I let someone walk over me, thinking that I am conducting constructive dialogue which will prevent this from happening again.

کوشش بھی کر امید بھی رکھ راستہ بھی چن پھر اس کے بعد تھوڑا مقدر تلاش کر

By the end of all of it I had woken up, I knew I was destroying myself. As I type this, Im not sure how to describe it, it was the best nightmare anyone could ask for, being awake I feel like I have been put back in the jail of my own thoughts. I live in isolation, I dont talk to anyone anymore, its like Im back to being myself after learning how to be so much more. I did not get closure, for a number of reasons, which Im okay with, one of us had to live like this, Im just glad it could be me.
I think my brain, due to its limited capacity to process a range of emotions, hid a lot of bad memories so I dont completely shut down. I am very thankful for that, I didnt shut down, and went through all of this to the point where the deep ache in my chest has slowly begun to disappear. It hasnt fully gone away, it has its moments.

میں تو منیرؔ آئینے میں خود کو تک کر حیران ہوا
یہ چہرہ کچھ اور طرح تھا پہلے کسی زمانے میں

Life ke Lage pare hai, ye and I am not able to do shit about it.
I got 88% through main subjects and 90% through best of 5 rule, SURPRISE SURPRISE I HAVE A SISTER WHO JUST HAD TO GET 92%
The amount of side eyes, taunts referred to as "just jokes" that am getting is just unbelievable considering it is coming from my own mother. AREY NAHI SAMAJH AA RAHA MAI KYA KARUN BC, life mein nahi sujh raha kya karun
I don't even know ki DPS Ranchi mein mujhe finally admission milega bhi ki nahi, I don't even know how long am gonna hold the sight of those disappointed faces of my parents masked behind the fake "hum proud hai"
Ab kuch gyanni chode aayenge, bolenge "tu abhi bacha hai, hamare problems dekh" AREY I DON'T GIVE A F, NAHI SAMAJH AA RAHI MUJHE LIFE
maa ki aankh, arts liya hai Maine ek aise hi "so called geniuses" of science dimag kharab karte hai aur ab maa baap :/
Is community ke buddho se vinti hai ki aap meri madad karein 🙏🏽

kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja kuuteh saleh bhen ke laudeh teri maa ki chut bosdiwaleh teri mayiaa ka bur chodu badwa salaa madar chood ka pilla randi ka baal machr ki jhaat chipkili ke taate gobar putr kuttiya ka pila baapchoda betichod chachi chod mama chod randi ka aulaad sala haram zada suur jahnt ke baal bakri chod chua chod randhwa raand ja jaamai chut marikeh lavda lavdeh ke baal kutaa ke luli bakri ki chut chipkili ke aand randi baaz kukur chod maai ka choda tera bhen ka choda bur phtleh chud ke 100 baap ka chuda hua kutta ka pila hua naali ka keeda taateh massina bur ke chatel chodu bhagat chut mari ka chut ka pilaa gaand ka sodagar chucci chusneh waleh jhaat ka bhaaji land peh chdeh ja

Bhai me drop le raha hu 25 ke liye...
Mains like gya hai qualified for advice. Kuch nha hone wlaa mera ik.. Par dunga zarur...
City center peASAT hone wala hai so..
Jo successful and failed dropper the woo mijhe bataye ki Allen kaisa hai.
ASAT ME JITNA BHI MELEGA ACHA RAHEGA...
So please kindly help me out.
2) yaar ye baap ko kiase manaye drop ke liye.. I got minimal percentile..
Pita mera nhi man raha khera ki jaa chup chap state nit.. Or mujhe jana IIT hai..
3) meri coaching bhut irregularities ke stah gayi hai.. orrr I tried my best but just made barely to my potential.
4) aint no gifted but hard working bass guidance and mahol ki zarurat hai...
5) let's connect guys who r taking drop for 25*

Haven't seen any posts regarding the drama on the sub and the views also seem low on YouTube considering the massive promotion they had done for the drama before it began. Something Haute didn't review it and Amma from Galaxy didn't say much good things about it either.
I think the drama shouldn't have started airing three episodes and just air the regular two which is what it is slotted for because it becomes hefty after a while to see the same zaalim baap with double standards shout at the daughters and wife while taunting her and then seeing Danish act like he has been cast in Tere Bin 2 (idk if it's just me but it gave me mixed vibes of Raaz-E-Ulfat from Hiba's side of the story and Tere Bin from Danish's).
Really hope it gets better with time and is actually a good story (Ishq Hai ki writer ne likha hai so scared to death tbh).
PS: does anyone know why it wasn't named Deewangi 2 but Jaan Nisaar while keeping bits and pieces of Deewangi's OST in this drama's OST and more so because it features Hiba and Danish after 4 years?

Hi guys, I’m from Delhi (21m).I cleared foundation in may 22(self study,first attempt) and appeared for CA inter group 1 in may23(got 57 in accounts). But phir ek mentally unstable girlfriend milgyi glti se jisne life ki watt lagadi. Bhai ab tk trauma ata h us ldki ka hrdin ki tune mujhe chora toh sucide krdungi ya apne haath ki nas kaat lungi ya mera baap tujhe maardega mere marne k baad . May23 se may24 agya aur Maine Abhi tk exam dobara nhi diya kisi bhi group ka. But right now I’m thinking of giving exam of g1(new scheme) in sept24 but kuch samjh ni ata ki du ya na du . Is it possible for me to do CA inter g1 in the next 3 months. Accounts and law are the subjects that are within my reach but I don’t know about taxation. Toh kya 3 months sufficient h taxation cover krne k liye aur g1 k exam dene k liye. Ab toh sala guilt feel hota h ki kyu ek saal barbaad krliya poora us ldki k chakkr Mai. Ideal scenario for clearing CA BHI ab at the age of 25-26 h jo pta ni kyu bahut jada lgra h . It feels like Mai baaki bachon se bahut pechen rehgya hu aur ek discarded child bngya hu apni family ka. No one forces me to earn because my brother is a well earning individual but I don’t getting motivation aur satisfaction that I will clear or not. Please help me!!!!
Also should I go for self study or take coaching from my previous tutor(inter wala) because I’m very lazy and procrastinate if left alone at home without any friend circle.
SORRY FOR MY BAD GRAMMAR ek dost ya bade bhai ya ek mentor ke naate hi kuch bata do toh bahut bhala hojayega🙏

So imma final year CS student, aur bhai mere job nahi lagi hai, par bhai kuch karne kaa jonoon hai, maa baap ko kush karna hai aur apna future bhi banana hai, so pls guid me...
Background : from tier 2 private cllg, know programming well, (typically mern stack ka 14 aur 200+ leetcode wala ) mere ek baar toc mei acche aye the to subject thoda acha lagta hai mujhe 🙂 ab yaad nahi kuch, maths to ghatna yaad hai mujhe shuru se padha hai sab kuch ( 12th ke bhi thode concepts revise karne honge), aur baki sab subjecta ka bhi same haal hai DSA ko chhod kar bas programming aati hai muze
1) How and where to start 2) What are some good resources 3) What best in your opinion ( offline/online) 4) What are good online classes in you opinion or experience ?
TLDR : launde ne bass backhodi ki hai cllg mei GATE ke liye guidance maang raha hai

Bachpan se hoshiyar tha....aur schizophrenic bhi tha (last year diagnose hua ye wala) Baap jabardasti NEET ke peeche pada hai Maine 2 saal khoob mehnat Kari but didn't worked out well pata nhi 360 se upar jaate hi nhi the (I had trouble remembering things normally...sab ulta pulta yaad hota tha, questions solve nhi hote the bcz of those imaginary chatters and destructive criticism from those voices) aur baap peechhe pada rha....abhi NEET 2024 diya....BAMS la sakta hu kya karu le loon? Ya admission leke college me hi phir se taiyari karu?(Ye mere baap ka plan hai) Tbh Mai thak chuka hu ye sab nautanki se.....BAMS me kuchh dhang ka scope hai kya? Otherwise majboori hai MBBS karne ki jise Mai ab lagan se to nhi karna chahta.... Please give your honest suggestions (Haan gareeb hoon private nhi afford kar paaunga....online coaching Li thi last year to wo bhi nhi li....partial tests me 540 ke around aate Hain aur full me max 478 gya tha.... Haan badtameez hoon kyuki apne baap ke behaviour se tang aa chuka hu...nhi wo alcoholic nhi hai) Yahan pe repost kar rha hu indianmedschool walo ne ban kar diya Aur haa agar doctors wali koi subreddit ho to bata do waha poonch loonga

So aaj boards ka result aaya and guess what my stupid ass scored 78.8 percentage (with highest in biology 82 like wtf jabki mein jee ki so called prep kar raha hu
kal pw ka jo short test diya tha us mein 96/96 aaye 10 baje result aaya maa baap full khush ki chalo thoda sa hi sahi par comeback to ho raha hai (not judging my test but they judged my seriousness)
fir madarchod result aa gaya aur papa thoda gussa ho gaye even told me a waste ( I am not blaming my father and pliz don't type you don't deserve him and all those bullshit bro just stfu and don't judge my family from this single line and my perspective)
par fir jab shaam ko thoda eavesdrop kara to suna ki papa bole ki chicken le aaye kya but my mom denied it saying ki aaj somvaar hai (my family are all shivbhakts and they say i was blessed with three marks on my forehead full badassery)
Physics : 26 question diye the 17 ho gaye baaki nahi bane even tho fight pura kiya
Chemistry : Bawaal chiz padhi be Fe0.93O wali chiz majaa aagaya hands down the best class
Maths : jaisa chal raha hai aur haa sir ne aaj se quad eqn start kara
aaj bhot kam self study hui aur raat ko jagkar apne notes + maths ke hw attempt karunga